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February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic, please write more to it or another one with Neji and TenTen, there is so many writers and not many NejiTen stories out there, well not great stories like this one :o)
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Tsukashi, good fic but several errors. As I could see, they were mostly just word substitution errors and not any big deal really. But yeah, going through it and correcting each error individually would make it a lot better. Anyway, I'd like to see some more chapters too. We need to see Neji take Tenten up on her offer to be on top. ;)
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please please update this fic i love it so much i just keep reading it over and over again i can get enough of it
update soon
update soon
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story rocks u should really update it and post atleast 2 more chapters
like everyone else is saying please update soon
like everyone else is saying please update soon
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
u have to update soon i cant get enough of this story
please please please update soon
please please please update soon
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My constructive critisism is: You have a lot of mistakes in here. Either re-proof it or have someone beta it for you. It detracts greatly from the story when you are trying to figure out why it says light until it clicks that the word is supposed to be like. Your chapters are short enough that you could combine them all and make this into a oneshot.
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very cute! Love the conversation at the end!
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please keep writing this fic, theres never enought Neji/Tenten fics out there and this ones great. please update soon and keep writing
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please make a 4. chapter!!!
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was cute