rate_review Reviews

it's very interesting story...AND HOOOOOT!!!
i like it.
can't wait for the next chpter.

Hehe! I love it! ^^ Please more!

Excellent! I love it! I love how it doesn't goes straight to sex because in some stories they speed the story up to that and it's awful writing really. You rock!

Okay first off, I hate it!

Second, The first thing was a joke. How the heck could you hate such a wonderful story. If you knew how good it was then you would know it can't be hated, therefore you win. If you did, oh well, now you do! ^^ lol. So anyway, I LOVE it beyond words and I hope to get an update soon. ^^ PLEASE AND THANK YOU! xD

This is a pretty good start. Its a bit brief, but still, it capture the interest of the reader. You probablly need to focus a little more on Sasuke's religous psychology in later chapters, but I'm guessing you are already aware of that. This biggest thing I have to say is be very carful not to make Catholicism look too bad. I may not be of that religous orintation but I dislike making other people's religious choices seem petty and stupid. I'm sure many people would agree with that. I'm not sure if you plan on the preist having a big role but for some reason the image of Sarutobi flashed through my mind.

Enother delicious story - you're really good at writing.
Interesting ideas and plot, good style and well-written
characters. You are one of the best authors here.
Meow impationtly waits for continue.

THIS IS SO AWESOME. such good writings ;__; please please please update so very soon

this sounds damned good. i'm looking foward to your next update. it's always fun reading a story about sasuke's lustful thoughts.

lol. this is chapter was tooo funny. i liked ino's idea. pretty sure sasuke would've liked it too. i wonder who else works with them?

i like this a lot its really interesting, and hot.