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for Rise of a Kage

by russianrocket

person casey
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome!! like srsly.. one of the best ones i've read.. xD
message me if you type another chapter n_n
person fan-girl
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
pliz write soon, this story is kinda twisted but i dont know i seem to like it. plizzzzzzz add another chapter i'm dying to know what garaa is gonna do to hinata.
person can
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The question that comes to my mind is have you seen or read Naruto? This is a really poory put together story, maybe you should take it down and fix it.
person Aeris
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
**hesitates** My, that was squicky and out of Temari's character, but I think I'll keep reading anyway...
person xwhiperedvoicesofmydemonselfx
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow i love it the way u take everything in to detail... itlike wow... i really like it please update soon i want to know what happens to hinata... wil gaara rape her again or something much worse...
person James
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... thats new and great
person Common_Thief
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story and I can't wait for the next chapter. I sure hope Naruto gets in there and clobbers them....and maybe gets a little something else. *nudge nudge wink wink*
person Puck
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Temari is THE best mistress I've ever seen...now if only there were more fics about her doing this to Hinata...Damn!
person meme
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update soon.
person beechan
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i liked it.