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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME! I can't wait for another update...The only part of the new chapter I found ewwish was the pee part...I don't care what anyone says, thats disgusting. >.< I'm not saying it sucked cause you did it, just saying it gross...^-^; Reading that part made me shiver. lol. Looking foward for another update.
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude update now
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that.was.messed.up! poor hinata, turned into a mere sex toy for gaara. i hope things will turn around. ofcorce im a fan of gaaraxhinata but thats just torture. i think gaara, temari, and kankuro were speakin in english scence the naruto charactors originally speak japanese and the sand sibilins can pass as americans. anyway write more i want to find out what happens next!!
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok I think its time 4 u 2 acctually hav more action, like toy and all dat and all
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! Continue! This story is so good!!!
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Err...I kind of like this. But only kind of. I'm a big Gaara fan and thus a Gaara/Hinata fan, but...
I'm sorry, but he's just too OOC unless he went to sleep. He'd only do this if he was sleeping. Hinata is not the kind to give up so quickly. I do wish for you to keep going, though, it's not too bad, I've definitely seen worse on AFF. So....update soon please? And fix Gaara and Hinata a little? I would like to see this again...
I'm sorry, but he's just too OOC unless he went to sleep. He'd only do this if he was sleeping. Hinata is not the kind to give up so quickly. I do wish for you to keep going, though, it's not too bad, I've definitely seen worse on AFF. So....update soon please? And fix Gaara and Hinata a little? I would like to see this again...
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Normally I don't read so much het.
But since this was a bdsm story, I had to try it out ^^
Yeah the characters are a little ooc but you wrote great bondage sex, which
is very rare. Most bdsm stories are too soft but yours was pretty realistic.
So keep the good work up ^____^
Bakuma (excuse my bad english, I'm a poor (^.^) german girl, who needs more of your great sex scenes *begs*)
But since this was a bdsm story, I had to try it out ^^
Yeah the characters are a little ooc but you wrote great bondage sex, which
is very rare. Most bdsm stories are too soft but yours was pretty realistic.
So keep the good work up ^____^
Bakuma (excuse my bad english, I'm a poor (^.^) german girl, who needs more of your great sex scenes *begs*)
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Even though i feel bad for Hinata....this is still going to be a Hina/Gaara story...right? Wow...this is good!! You have to keep writing...(.^_^.)
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHAT!?!? THAT'S IT. one hell of a short chapter