rate_review Reviews

this sucked major ass which is how you probably like it

Ooo it sounds interesting Gaara seems like he's been put into some kind of horny Shukaku mode and poor Hinata is the recipent. I like it though. Great job^^ Continue when u can
Mic Mic

OK... I dont mean to be rude but... I must agree with the previous reviewer. This is definatly not good.
I mean, where are you in Naruto? Are you only watching it on cartoon network? Because if so, they you are way behind most as to where the story is. If you are going to go back to a certain point, the say where it picks up at. Other then that, you really need to work on you technique and length.

Over all, I give it a D-. Not even worth really reading actually. And that comes from a guy who spends a large ammount of his free time reading. To the point where he loves reading almost anything.

Dude this really sucks....like bad... how could you write such pathic thing...GOD YOU SUCK

I like where this story is going, so please update whenever you can. ^-^

I've never read a Gaara-Hinata fic before. I like what you wrote so please update soon!!

It's an interesting start, though it just feels weird to have Hinata squealing over something. She's shy and introspective, not the kind of girl to squeal out loud.

interesting

ok..very nice this is really anticipating but one problem i dont think hinata will be all that polite after being punched in thenface several times...well update soon