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for Kakashi Unmasked

by xtranew

person melissa
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm not exactl a beta, but I can correct spelling and grammerical errors to the best ability of someone who always did well in English Class.
person Anon
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
um...yeah I see that typo....I meant exactly lol.
person Chi-chan
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you haven't given up on it! I was pleasantly surprised to see you updated! And the chapter was great... I can't wait to see how Kakashi acts later on in the pregnancy, who these bastards are that are threatening Konoha... and if Itachi'll find out... what'll happen with that.

The interactions Kakashi had with Pakkun and Tsunade made me laugh outright and the Kakashi fangirls were just a riot!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
person Hightojo
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it, I like it....I want to find out what Itachi does when he finds out... Also i would be happy to review if you still need someone.
person Dana
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
These is one of the first time i think one of these story is good. I hope you keeping it up with this story.
person Sam
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I totally LOVE this story!!!!!!! I've waited a very long time for another chapter I almost cried when I saw this!!!!! Please more!!! Not a too long wait this time please! <3
person Krystal
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Honestly I didn't expect much from this story but after reading the first chapter I was hooked. Also it really works with the whole pregnancy thing and now reading the last chapter you can see there's so much more!
Such a good story, keep it up.
person llyoung
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your story and look forward to the next chapter.
person Tabberwok
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories... wil you update please? I'll love you forever!
person Tabberwok
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.. I had never heard of this pairing before reading your fiction, yet somehow, you manage to make it seem so right. The Dialouge and Action are perfectly aligned, giving a sense of realism to the story.

Do you plan on making any more chapters? If you do, I'm looking foreward to it. :D

-Tabberwok