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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just finished the chapter where Kakashi 1st puked and I just can't help to come here and KYA!!! It was amazing! Thanks goes to your beta-readers as well. Rock on!
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! What would I like? Ah hah! Since he's having twins, a baby boy and a baby gal! Wahahahah! I loved your idea of this fic! FINALLY an MPREG ItaKaka fanfiction!!!!
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is very good. I can't wait for you to update. You took such an interesting turn with the Mpreg. Also, I like the Kaka/Ita pairing. It's unique and, in my mind, very possible. Itachi put too much effort into torturing Kakashi with the Mangekyo when they fought. There has to be something behind it. I cheer you on and present you with cookies! Keep up the great work!
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your last chapter was good. As for this one, I liked it as well. I'm definitely interested to see what happens next! Can't wait for the next great update!
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well written as always. Interesting primise and not so unbelievable. I can tell that you have put a great deal of thought into this story. That is a rare quality. So, lets see where you take this and have some fun.
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This has got to be one of the best stories I've read with Kakashi as main chara (and uke ^^). I'm very impressed, normally mpreg putting me off because they tended to be unreasonable and exaggerated. At first the pairing (ItaKaka) kinda baffled me, but I'm now very glad that I've decided to read it till the very end.
I love your writting style and how you have made this whole story flows.
Can't wait for the next chapter. *rub hands in suspense*
I love your writting style and how you have made this whole story flows.
Can't wait for the next chapter. *rub hands in suspense*
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What can I say? Good job, I liked it a lot. The descriptions are perfectly written and not overly explained. You've done each character justus by capturing their characterization properly, especially Itachi, many fanfic's writers described him as insane, pyschotic, etc. They didn't try to dwelve in his chara further.
I love how you add the detail throughout your story. You gave a reason for Itachi (sort of) drawn to Kakashi. Best wishes for you and your writing! Though in the end you leave me wondered when Itachi would make a comeback?
I love how you add the detail throughout your story. You gave a reason for Itachi (sort of) drawn to Kakashi. Best wishes for you and your writing! Though in the end you leave me wondered when Itachi would make a comeback?
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is great. Twins too even better, double the trouble. I wonder how Itachi is going to find out his the going to be fathers of twins.
I'm also voting for Twins Boys.
I'm also voting for Twins Boys.
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, me liked this <3333 please update soon onegai?
oh... and I wondered, could you please e-mail me when you have updated? I wanna read the continuation, but I'm not on this site too often... ;.;
oh well, anyway (you don't have to, just a plead) good work and I'm looking forward to next chapter... Itachi will accept the kids, won't he? ne, ne?
oh... and I wondered, could you please e-mail me when you have updated? I wanna read the continuation, but I'm not on this site too often... ;.;
oh well, anyway (you don't have to, just a plead) good work and I'm looking forward to next chapter... Itachi will accept the kids, won't he? ne, ne?