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for Kakashi Unmasked

by xtranew

person essenceofthedark
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
>.< it didn't let me post my whole review ;.; let's see if it works this time?

wow me liked this <3333 please update soon onegai?

oh... and I wondered, could you please e-mail me when you have updated? I wanna read the continuation, but I'm not on this site too often... ;.;

oh well, anyway (you don't have to, just a plead) good work and I'm looking forward to next chapter... Itachi will accept the kids, won't he? ne, ne?
person essenceofthedark
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
again :( (oh and I vote for twin boys ^^

wow me liked this please update soon onegai?

oh... and I wondered, could you please e-mail me when you have updated? I wanna read the continuation, but I'm not on this site too often... ;.;

oh well, anyway (you don't have to, just a plead) good work and I'm looking forward to next chapter... Itachi will accept the kids, won't he? ne, ne?
person heartless
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far!! Your writing style is flows really well and I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!
person linlin
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love this chapter, can't what to see what happens next time. Keep on writing. ^^
person Violet
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*glomps* i wanna hear more!
person Sai
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter and story overall ^^. If I have one problem with it it's your use of italics, they are really REALLY off the mark. Most of the time you don't even need them, just something to consider.
person Anon
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
=) don't be worried this chapter was great!!!! Ahaha I really didn't expect the twins part though. Great idea! Would it be a boy and a girl? ohhhhh i can't wait till you update! >_< KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! =D
person kirara
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
For a person who doesn't speak english I must say that I am surprised at your large vocabulary. This is one of the best fics that i have read, absolutely love it, you have such originality and creativeness. You stayed true to all the characters' personalities, kudos. Don't get in a hurry to please your readers. Keep up your good work!
person deion
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter and 2 baby boys
person Gingitsune
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Twins!! Wow! Kakashie is going to have his hands full. I'm so glad that he was able to swallow his pride and ask for help instead of waiting for something to happen first. :) I truly wonder how Itachi is going to react when he hears the news. Hmm....more? :)