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boy twins

OOOH WOU !
That was hot. Heh.
Aaww.. Write more. I wanna read more!!

Boy! If Kakashi would have a child, it will be boy!

That was wonderful, though I would like to take the bets with you as to how many will stop reading because most of us enjoy the lemons instead of the actual story but in this case I am not one of them. But don't get me wrong, Lemons are my at most favorite in the stories! *winks*

What do you mean by repercussions? If the child had been girl, would she not inherit Sharingan? Just curious.

Anyway, I gave my vote for a baby boy!

*faints* I've always thought of myself as a kaka/ita love child and to finally see this pairing makes me happy beyond any words.
*wimper* please post another chapter soon~ I'll draw you some nice ita/kaka yaoi when you do... please?

well its sertinly origenal, ive never seen one where kakashi is pregnant, its HELERIOUS. Please continue to write more.

I can only hope that Kakashi's baby is a boy. ._. Don't ask me why, I just don't imagine him ever having a girl as a baby. Ahem, this chapter still had some gramatical errors (but despite that, I think you're doing just fine ;]), and it was amusing, reading Kakashi having a sudden epiphany as to why he was so sick. Gee, and he's a genius, shouldn't he have known?

Ahem, well, I just realized, after re-reading chapter 1, that Sasori couldn't have died so easily. He was a member of the Akatsuki, for Christ's sake--and the grandson of Chiyo, right? So that would've made him virtually impossible to defeat. I know, I know. Sakura kicked his ass, but seriously. I could tell he let her kill him. There was that look in his eyes, that cold, and unfathomnable look that spelt resignation...

Anyways, wonderful chapter so far and the only suggestion I have: BABY BOY! o.O; If Kakashi is going to have a baby, I would imagine it as a boy.

Lookin' good so far,
Evans

On,very interesting.For some reason this MP does not turn me off at all.Normally I despise them.well I dispise any preg fics at all.I am not a baby person...not at all and I've been there and done that(you are never done however)Your high standards show,this makes sence and flows well.good luck and thank you.Oh,I like this too cause Itachi had a reason to like Kakashi,it was a wonderful hot scene,esp. there third go...Itachi sure is inventive.Ha....and we know who leader is now too..Huge shock!!!!!!!

Ok, I'm not gonna lie, that was pretty hot. I liked this a lot, and I'm curious to see exactly where this is going. I would appreciate it you continued this fic, you can't leave us poor readers hangin here! I hope you update soon. Regardless, my best wishes for you and your writing.


Dryad1789@hotmail.com

I sincerely adore your story. o_O What's more to say, is that I have never read a Kakashi/Itachi fiction. This is the very first one. It surprised me, that you made Kakashi 3 years older than Itachi (so that would make him.. 23? If Itachi was 20 after the arc?). Never really thought of that, but it somehow made sense. What I liked was when Kakashi called Itachi insatiable. ;] I was ready to say:

"You don't know the half of it."

I'm looking forward to your next update (mwhahaha, more Uchiha love!)
Evans

better than I thought,good reasoning.i liked the seal bit.Hurrah!