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for Kakashi Unmasked

by xtranew

person sam
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story and hope that you update it soon.
person maya
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read your fic yet (and I intend to drop a review again when I do) but I just wanted to say that I am so very glad that someone finally actually writes fic about that pairing! *cries* It's so rare!
So when I read your summary I nearly choked from surprise on the water I was drinking at the time!
person maya
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*speechless*
OMG YOU MUST GO ON OMG THIS IS TEH HOTTT! *cough*
Honestly, this was the hottest smut I've read in this fandom for so long!
And not only the smut, I like everything! I so want to know what happens after that, please continue, please!
person Suzaku24
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so far......lots of yaoi.....need to get another chapter up as soon as possible.
person nanamen
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
uuuuhhh... it's hot in here!!!!
Darn, that's a hot fic! I like this pairing and I like youre story. I'll definetely read the further chappies too. There isn't enough ItaKaka fics.

Pls keep up the good work

(can't write a better rewiew... need to take a COLD shower just now)
person Anon
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I...Cant ... wait ...till...THE NEXT CHAPTER UPDATE SOON !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Lexie
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay I swear, that was the best fucking I've ever read.
person Meemei
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. When I first read the summary, I was like 'What!' because, is was such a foreign concept to me. It is so completely original (well not the mpreg pert, but Kakashi being pregnant, by Itachi no less) that I was like 'wow!' I think this will be a fic to read. Your an excellent writer and I must say, you are very original.

Peace
Meemei
person Gwynhafra
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...you stopped at quite a cliffhanger. Update soon. ^^ . It was very nice.
person KarMegas
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting fic thus far. You appear to have a strong command on the English language even though it isn't your natural language. I don't know where this fic is going but i'm guessing that you do. I admit that i am a busy person and I can foresee that things wont be much better since college starts on Monday but nonetheless i am willing to try to be a beta-reader for our fic...although i don't believe that you really need one. Anyway, gat to go.