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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohh I do so adore Sasuke/Hinata. I remember reading this a while back and I'm glad to see that it has not been forgotten. I like the slow pace, the building up so to speak. To give a little pointer, you have spelled Tsunade's name wrong on a few places. And since I'm not native to the English language couldn't say if the grammar is good or bad. Well, I can say it's good since I can't see anything that's wrong. I do hope you continue this because it's has great potential to be a great story.
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Epp, your buildign the tension up nicely. I wonder what Sasuke will try to do. Please continue when you have the chance too. This is really good.
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February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You updated, Yay! Happy dance! Please, please do continue with this story.
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I still hoping this will turn into a Sasuke/Hinata but overall this is alright fiction.
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story ! update soon plz
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know I read this story before, but I beign a lazy bum I didn't review.
I really like this story. the sexual tension between Hinata and Sasuke, keke is very hot and fierce. However, there is still the Neji/Hina thing * somethign i try to normally shy away from. I'll still read I just may just skip the lemon scenes. That's just my personal prejudice. It wouldn't be wrong for you to write lemons of them). Any way, I hope to read mroe of this story. Please feel free to email me when you update.
I really like this story. the sexual tension between Hinata and Sasuke, keke is very hot and fierce. However, there is still the Neji/Hina thing * somethign i try to normally shy away from. I'll still read I just may just skip the lemon scenes. That's just my personal prejudice. It wouldn't be wrong for you to write lemons of them). Any way, I hope to read mroe of this story. Please feel free to email me when you update.
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry to say but this Hinata pisses me off. She gives me the shits with all her negativity. She can not at least give her and Sasuke relationship a chance or even an open mind of it. I’ll keep reading this because I’m a big fan of Sasuke/Hinata pairing.
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its moveing along well.Sasuke is fun.I'm glad Hinata isn't entirely humble and tounge tied.ino said sasuke feeld different,I'm sure they all do after all that time but you are useing this to foreshadow,eh?
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhh keep going!!! im so loveing this!! the susspence is crazy, i love it!!
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome update! Can't wait for another chapter, it's really enjoyable to read.
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