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by Lyndsay

schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You had me at your Author Notes when talking about the magnificence of Uchihacest. :) A really good one-shot. I liked it a lot.
person tallia
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^^ heh. i feel bad for sasuke but... that was hot. nice job.
person BrucesGirl
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So many hits and only 3 reviews. Ugh. Don't you just hate freeloaders? ;) Hey, I loved this oneshot. I'm not much on Uchihacest but I love psychological mind fucks, and this definitely qualifies as one. I might suggest that you look up some psychological torture devices and maybe incorporate those into the next story you write. It would make the bad guy very hateable and make the story erotic at the same time.

Great job! If I had a favorites list, this would be on it. Bravo!
person sris
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay for uchihacest. *waving small uchihacest flags* That was HOT! Itachi being such a bastard and breaking Sasuke. Good for him ^__^ I'd like to read more from you, but I don't like SasuNaru or pairings with Sasu (except uchihacest yay!) or Naru... I like your writing style.
person Anon
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wah... i do believe i will never think the same way about the word "broken" ever again... honest to god... sasuke sounded almost like a horse. XD ... haha. not exactly an uchihacest fan... (*hides behind SasuNaru banner*) ... but it's not my fault that ItaSasu tends to be hot, ne?

i don't think i've ever seen so many Aa's in my LIFE.

Aa... well. nicely done. just a few spelling errors and misused words here and there. nothing a good once over can't fix.
person KeairaxSeiaa
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aniki, you posted it! Wah, it's so good @__@ Much love for the awesome Uchihacest <3