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Chapter 1 - I'd love to have a naked Ko running around my house. For that matter, I love to have a naked Izumo, Asuma and Shika too. Better yet, all four at once (but especially Shika).

Lovely start to the story. Ko and Izumo are so cute together.

Okay, so now I'm dying over here for some violent sex. *Sniffle*, I thought Chillin'II was bloody hot, but Sweet Lover of Virgin Mary, THAT was insufferbly hot. And THANK YOU so much for putting my name in the beginning of your Author's Notes, it really made my day (still does when I come back read it) I'm going to be posting lemons here soon, and I hope you like them. Anyway, you're just about the best writer EVER to me. Yes, I love your fics, gods, your mind is lower than low and I love it! The sexiest thing about this story is Kotetsu getting off on Izumo beating him. I thought I had died and went to heaven when I read the part of him jerking off over the broken rib Izumo gave him. That was the hottest thing my eyes have ever had the pleasure of reading. Please consider doing a KakaNaru or a KakaIruNaru some day, or maybe a GenRai just like this one, with plenty of mashochism and some coughextrakinkybitslikeinD/sNarutocough? I would sell my very soul if you would. If you want it, it's yours. Lol, so I'm off to start D/s Naruto, heh, I'll bet that's some good stuff there. So bye! I hope you take a look at my fic if you haven't already, it's called Situational Hazard and if you don't want to wait for it here, you can always find it on ff.net under the same username. Sorry for the long review, I just love you. (not like that of course, lol)

Just want to let you know that I was sad too about finding out about Asuma. T__T But I had enjoyed your Izumo/Kotetsu immensely and wished you would continue this beautiful piece. But I def understand how you feel.. Thank you for sharing this fic once again!

Cute, when can we expect a new chappie. I did not read much sm stories but I like yours. I don't know too much about kotetsu and Izumi characters. They are fuck-up in your fic, but goes very well with the plot. And as for your memo my family would die if they know that I love reading yaoi.
Keep the good work
read you later
:)

I am really enjoying your stories... I think they're all pretty unique.
In regards to the chapter 11:
Ultimately... it's up to you as the author if you wish to slash and trash the last chapter. It's a good chapter.
Personally, I think you can always leave the chapter you currently have submitted but add some additional info if you are concerned about the jutsu inconsistency... eg. there is a full moon - that would cast enough light for Shikamaru to utilize his shadow jutsus.
Of course... in regards to the Steamy Shikamaru romp with Kotetsu... why should Shika just have one? They are a package deal after all!

Dear lord, this was the best fanfic I've read in a looong time. Thank you. o_o Please write more!

I declare that the gorgeous cover of Naruto ch. 322 is the unofficial (G-rated) image for this story.

GOD I love this. And they've barely done anything yet!
If you have ideas on where you want to take the story, I'm all for going AU immediately. Who knows what's going to happen in the manga... what if the unthinkable occurs and the mission has -gasp- fatalities?

again.... i really like!! i never thought i would EVER read this paring...loving it continue!!

That was amazing. I love this fic! If only there could be some AsumaShika or some IzuShikaKo. lol That sounds oddly like InoShikaCho..... Can't wait for the update.