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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
KOTETSU x IZUMO! THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU for writing this. I loves you.
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I <3 this story deadly. 8D
Make it all end well, I hate reading stories where they come back from a mission all fucked up and then they have to go through the healing process that takes forever. D< I lose all interest there.
Make it all end well, I hate reading stories where they come back from a mission all fucked up and then they have to go through the healing process that takes forever. D< I lose all interest there.
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That little fuck ate my fucking comment. XD;
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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I lurvs you! Izumo and Kotetsu are "the hotties" of Naruto, and a tasty lil fic involving the two of them is a fabulous fic indeed. Your spelling and grammar are immaculate, which is definitely more than I can say for some of the other fics out there. Great thing is, I'm stoked about them being on a mission with Asuma and Shikamaru. The hotties are finally getting some action! In more ways than one...
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE the story!!! Kotetsu and Izumo don't get NEARLY enough attention! They are one of my fave pairings!! *huggles you for writing it* Thank you!! I can't wait to read more!!
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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^___^ Loved the new chapter!
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hm.. i'm normally not in S/M but this rocks.. ^.^
I think the Ino Story shouldn't be in this story but the Asuma/Shika teasing would be very funny ^^
I think the Ino Story shouldn't be in this story but the Asuma/Shika teasing would be very funny ^^
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think I waited too long to check for updates... I might've missed a survey...
I'm looovin' this. Of the small amount Izumo/Kotetsu I've read (and they're mostly bit parts in other stories), they seem lovey and normal and mild and DULL. --NOT HERE!-- This pair needs some spice!!!
Some Shikamaru/Asuma teasing would be quite amusing! And it will build the anticipation for the return to Konoha. The Ino flashback.... eh.
Poor Kotetsu... he seems a bit overwhelmed right now (happy to upset to happy at the drop of a hat). I'm not sure what to tell you regarding when/how he'd start spilling some secrets. Maybe after something puts Izumo in a sullen little jealous mood... I dunno.
Thanks for writing and posting. I can feel for you regarding real-life friends not wanting to read... my friends aren't into this stuff either (or else they're too wussy to admit it).
I'm looovin' this. Of the small amount Izumo/Kotetsu I've read (and they're mostly bit parts in other stories), they seem lovey and normal and mild and DULL. --NOT HERE!-- This pair needs some spice!!!
Some Shikamaru/Asuma teasing would be quite amusing! And it will build the anticipation for the return to Konoha. The Ino flashback.... eh.
Poor Kotetsu... he seems a bit overwhelmed right now (happy to upset to happy at the drop of a hat). I'm not sure what to tell you regarding when/how he'd start spilling some secrets. Maybe after something puts Izumo in a sullen little jealous mood... I dunno.
Thanks for writing and posting. I can feel for you regarding real-life friends not wanting to read... my friends aren't into this stuff either (or else they're too wussy to admit it).
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg.. I love this story..and the pairing.. ^^
I think raunchy is always good..but the story should also consider the feelings of them .. so a little WAFF is also good XD
Ryu*Ryu
I think raunchy is always good..but the story should also consider the feelings of them .. so a little WAFF is also good XD
Ryu*Ryu
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
1. Should it just stop here, having reached a lemon? (yes/no) No
2. Should all the chapters include both a Kotetsu and a Izumo version? (yes/no) Yes
3. If this continues would you prefer (a) more of the night at the hotel and the morning after
or (b) jump to "after the mission"? (a/b) Rest of night & morning after, then after mission
4. Should Kotetsu tell Izumo the truth about his clone/replication "M/F" sexual experiences? (yes/no) Yes
2. Should all the chapters include both a Kotetsu and a Izumo version? (yes/no) Yes
3. If this continues would you prefer (a) more of the night at the hotel and the morning after
or (b) jump to "after the mission"? (a/b) Rest of night & morning after, then after mission
4. Should Kotetsu tell Izumo the truth about his clone/replication "M/F" sexual experiences? (yes/no) Yes