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by Hestia

person Zaraa
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
1. Should it just stop here, having reached a lemon? NO!
2. Should all the chapters include both a Kotetsu and a Izumo version? yes
3. after the mission
4. Should Kotetsu tell Izumo the truth about his clone/replication "M/F" sexual experiences? yes

^.~
person fib
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOoooh this is excellent. Thanks for giving this pairing some loooove! Can't wait for more!
person ronsmyhero
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! The tension since the begining has been so great! I loved the what Asuma said about Shikamaru having his hand in his pants! LOL so funny! Great job!
person Bianca D.
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am intrigued by your story. I do not think I have seen an Izumo and Kotetsu story before. Please keep going!
person Nyuchan
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I simply love it ^.^

Looking forward to more >:D
person temptingping
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! You've written it well and I like getting inside both of their heads. Looking forward to more.
person ronsmyhero
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I'm new to yaoi, but I find that I really like this. Izumo and Kotetsu are an interresting pair that I haven't seen. Nice job. I also like that you are incorporating the use of the newer manga chapters. I'll be looking forward to a new chapter from you! x3