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that was so good. very well written and it flowed so well.
very good story!

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Such a good story. I've been meaning to sit and read it for awhile. I love Naruto in this, I fluff him way too much, and the carnal and controlling version of him is a lot of fun. :)

*fans herself* oh gawd, this fic was toooooooooooooooooooo hot for the internet! this was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo smexy!

Ohh that is a nice story .You have a talent for making a very hot read. I would love to see more of this type of fun . If you have it in you. You write very hot scenes and I will look forward for more.

Kyah! That was hot. Weird, I really liked the whole Naru/OC thing, usually I get jealous if they're with anybody else, but it didn't bother me at all. Maybe because Sasuke was watching, I don't know! I have to tell you, I just loved the end at the scene. I like when the boys talk after sex because it's always so humorous if you let it be. And I laughed so hard when Sasuke was called a kinky bastard and the bit about the stuff in Naruto's closet. And yes, you did set it up perfectly for more. If there's more with kyuubi to be revealed I'd say it doesn't have to be just a PWP. I'd say go for it! Handcuffs and bondage, oh my!

I LOVED IT. very kinky i think u should continue and make some kind of plot to it. MORE MORE MORE. umm...anyways great story

Sweet Jesus that was HOT!!!
I love seeing a Seme Naruto dominate Sasuke!!!
It's just not done very often, you know what I mean???
I love Sasuke to death as Seme but there is something HOT about Naruto taking Sasuke to town!!! Please tell me that you making more or if not more to this story, please make another story with Naruto Seme!!!!
PLEASE!!!!!!
***bows down low****
Thank you
You are great!!

oh please, it's too good to be a one-shot! :))))

/mutters to self.. "must take cold shower, must take cold shower...." OMG that was HAWT!!!!!!

Hey! I really like this PWP!! You should continue this with other interesting plots......wait...there are no plots! So other PWPs will do just fine!!!!