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for Pet Sitter

by Shosuro

person Anon
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!! How did Garra get into Naruto's apartment? Hurry with the next chapter!!
person roely
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow! Gaara? is gaara in love with naruto? good story hot!
person Zrina
schedule January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Eeep! Gaara showed up! Doesn't bode well. Can't wait to see Jaraiya's reaction to Naruto's announcement!! The sex was fantastic!! Can't wait to read more!
person feisu
schedule January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story, so much smut *drools* I can understand why you just could not stop writing the 4th chapter. It is really good. update soon, til I'll reread the story again and again and again :D
person eien no ren
schedule January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damned nose bleeding hot piece of art! More! please!1 That was really, really arousing, nyah I want a threesome with those two!!
person blisblop
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You still rock.Very clean clear heart felt writing.You really like these characters! I have never read said manga/anime S.P. but thanks for the in.All the ins in fact.Oro comes after Sasuke and Itachi who was about to make him his after spying on the boys dies protecting his Sasuke ( Sas goes to submit to save Naruto).He takes Oro out the window with him the brothers eyes are blzing red as Itachi smiles and says he will catch up another time.Sob. Still sharingan Kabuto going for Naruto is sent insane by the sight of Sasukes eyes?Oro's death?Or....Ita saves Sas by taking his place with Oro?Naruto then heals the off balence Sasuke with Kyubbi sex and they.....I'm ranting of course..( anyone feel free to...)...Love the fic.Luck ...Hot Stuff.
person AreYouLonelyForMe
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! That was...really...HOT!!!!! So much smut!!! I thought I was going to die from overload!!!! Your really good at this!! Wherever this story is going I really love it! And I'd really love you if you could update real soon!! ^_- (glomps you)

-Jason
person Yabun
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
For some reason the first time I read the story summary I had an image of a fluffy black bunny with Sharingan eyes XD. Haha, I can almost imagine the bunny twitching his nose in irritation while glaring at Naruto.

Anyways, I absolutely adore this story and I already added it to my Favorites list. I can't wait 'til the next update, but I'll try.

Goodluck getting over the writer's block!
person Kujo
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!! I totally thought of these two when I saw that scene in Sensitive Pornograph! Well, I though of KakaIru, first, but my mind couldn't wrap around the idea of Kakashi as submissive. But this was totally awesome! I just know it'll keep flashing through my mind every time I see that scene again. THANK YOU!


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person eien no ren
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely perverted imagination... yeah... um, you can always bring Orochimaru knocking down Sasuke's door wanting him back... and Itachi bring him nightmares that he doesnt want Naruto to know about. Guilt can push him towards seeing his brother's face everywhere... say he killed the family or something equally nasty to merit his wanting to kill his own brother... so he is constantly blowing hot and cold with Naruto. He doesnt want to taint Naruto with his darkness but needs Naruto's sunshine to conquer his darkness and inner pain. Meanwhile, Naruto can find Sasuke's attitude weird and worrysome as he struggles with school. You can bring Iruka and Kakashi back, make Kakashi hear a conversation between them that's plenty suggestive and when he blows you can have him dominating IRuka and getting them mad. Orochimaru can try to get his revenge in both fronts... Sasuke and Tsunade... while Naruto meets Itachi in a pet sitting stint. There are many things to be done as long as I get to read a fisting scene between Sasuke and Naruto... *blush* yeah, I am that perverted too. Lemme know if my suggestions were helpful somehow, ne?