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HOLY SWEET MACARONI!!!!!!!!


That was great < especially chapter 3 > ! You are really great at writting the sex scene ..I mean REALLY!

Keep up the great work...and HAPPY NEW YEAR!

I was just thinking of something as I read the last bit of this that I thought I might share. Shouldn't Sasuke get a job? But it really seems like there would be no good place for him to work... if he worked with Naruto they'd both be fired. But he's such an unpleasant person to be around most of the time that he'd have a hard time working without Naruto to keep his 'bastardness' in check. He could work as a model but... were would he find a job like that? Ok... yeah that was a bit random... but it's fun to think about.

I just love all your story’s, There all so deliciously Sweet!!

Really great job on the new chapter^-^ I prefer Naruto being seme but you did a really great job with Sasuke^-^ and I almost never like Sasuke being seme so... YOUR STORY IS SO GREAT! Please update soon.

First off- I love your story. The smutt is wonderful and I like how you added to the plot of S.P. and mad it your own. As for the suggestions. I have a few. Maybe sasuke isn't the only 'pet' out thier maybe naruto's next job is with a nother one of these 'pets.' Like a raccoon mabye. (Sorry I;m a big Garaa/Naru fan. lol) Then you can have a little bit of smutt but have naruto turn whoever-it-is down because he has sasuke. That would make the new pet confused and give him reason to seek naruto out again. Hence giving you at least two chapters! XD Well I hope you like these idea's or if nothing else help you get out of this writers block. Can't wait till your next chapter! XD

I liked the shower scene...(Very kinky and hot).... also the Sasuke on top... hot also (Naruto is going to feel that in the morning!! XD)

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holycarp!! awsome fic and awsome smut. if u still need some help with the plot you could always throw somthing in about itachi coming back or getting out of jail or wherever he's been and stalking naruto, like in the anime and stuff. so then sasuke and naruto are forced to join together in the power of love to defeat itachi and his evil minions and stuff. ok....maybe that;s a bit too cheesy...just throw in some blood and a rape scene and it's not so bad. if you want somthing more original, i'm out of ideas.

Hee-hee...I had to go and download Sensitive Pornogragh after reading this...great fic.

WOW. OMG . HOT. Do I need to go on? I love the smut . You do it so well. Who needs plot when you can write good smut . Hope you get over your writers block and can write what you wont . I will come ack for more no matter what you wont to write. Thanks for taking the time to write and post this.

Bwhahaha! Oh you're so uber, like, that was such an awesome take on Sensitive Pornograph. Naruto and Sasuke are much more in character in the second chapter, but that's only 'cause of the quotes in the previous one, and wow they were some good fecking lemons. :]

Beca