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I just luuuuuuuuuurv Naru/Sasu pair (smut). Yummy yummy! I hope you find the inspiration to write more soon!

if you don't have beta readers, I'd be willing to beta for u. I have msn, aim and yahoo. Tho I'm normally on msn only.

email me and i'll give u the msn account if yr interested.

As a proud owner of the actual movie Sensitive Pornograph I have to say this story was absolutely amazing! A sensual recreation of a beautiful movie! Very well done with my favorite pairing of all times. Hope to read more from you soon.

Wow!!! This is a GREAT story so far. I've really enjoyed reading it.
For suggestions on your story....umm maybe you can have Sasuke's old Master come back and try to take him back by offering him the "power" that he needs. Also, you could have Sakura trying to get inbetween those two. Well those were just a few suggestions. I hope they help.

i love you... you made my day. that.was.the.best.sex scene i ever read. you're amazing.this story is amazing. well.. for the plot. you can put whatever you want as long as you have that wonderfull smut in there :D oohhh and maybe you can do somethin' like a party with embarassing scenes . and dirty dancing :D that would be quite funny and nice in my opinion. but hey you're the author. so . i can't wait . good luck with your writing :D

Much love for shower sex.

I fucking love

LOVE

sensative pornography

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I am really happy you are gong to continue this story... but chapter three was a bit of a disappointment. I really like NaruSasu, and your first two chapters were SO good! I was really looking forwards to more. Please write more NaruSasu?

*pat pat*

That was some hot smut ^^. Bathroom smut is so... steamy... *daze*... I have to ask though, whether it's necessary to have so many exclamation marks attached to the end of one sentence XP.

Great chapter XP. Keep feeding =3.

*pats back* Writers Block is a normal infection, my dear author... lol I really liked this one... After reading your first chapter, I went around the internet trying to find where I could watch SP... And I found it on youtube... only the first part tho... And half of this part of SP that you have in your story... *sighes* it isnt there anymore, but I have to say it was HOT when it was there... lol And I loved the chapter! Sweet, but at the same time hot and smexy... lol ^^

And Sasuke, I hate to say, is the better seme, in my opinion! XD lol In all fanfics, I usually read him as seme... Every now and then, he's uke, but mostly seme.. Naruto just gives off the better uke-vibe, you know? lol But I love this either way anyways... Just wanted to give my opinion.... Sasu/Naru/Sasu is great all around, you know? lol

*glomps* Well, I hope this isnt over! And I cant wait to see what you'll do next!