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DAMN THAT WAS HOT!!!
Naruto should always be the seme between the two.
I loved it, can't wait for the next chapter.

I loved it. I simply loved it. As a lover of both the manga and anime of SP I wonder why the hell I didn't come up with the idea. I like the way you blend in the characters from Naruto and even Kyuubi's red eyes.. Nothing but praise from this little troll...!! And if you continue it - I would love those chapters too :)

I feel horrible that this might not be a long comment, but I too am in school and have tons of work. Even with Labor Day around the corner, I have a brother coming over from Houston so I'll be helping my mom make this enormous Turkey. Am I getting off topic? O.o Gomen...gomen. Ummm, that first chapter just blew me away. I don't know WHAT the heck it originally came from (b/c I'm not familiar with the name you mentioned) but it was AWESOME. You did such a wonderful job on it and got me readily hooked from the start. I thought that at first Naruto would be going over to take care of a bunny OWNED by Sasuke. I was really surprised when you had him gagged and handcuffed in the closet. I thought that maybe someone had attacked him and Naruto just happen to be there to his rescue. The smut was ......*drools* ....so appetizing. I love it. And the ending part of that chapter with Sasuke running away made me so happy. And then finding Naruto at school was WOW. And in front of his friends too ^^

The second chapter began kinda fluffy with a whole lotta teasing running presto. I hope that Naruto isn't a viscious person. Hopefully it's just the inner beast that enjoys seeing Sasuke in pain. He seems so caring and I love him being dominate. I really have to go right now b/c my brother needs to get on. I'll be looking forward to your next chapter. ^=^

Ja ne Sweets, =^.^=


~Ria ^.~

I love your story!!! It's one of the smuttiest things I've ever read and I totally love it!!! And you have the characters personalities shown perfectly. Even though Sasukes the uke you made it so he still has his ego and pride. Not many writters can do that. I can't wait for the next one!

-wipes up puddle of drool- um... I liked it...very hot no not the right words for that.... incredibly hot!! YA!

VII

ROFL!
I can't believe you made another chapter...but I'm not UPSET about it, lol.
I think it's cool that you're continuing this fic with your OWN ideas, now.
Not that I didn't enjoy reading a somewhat altered version in chapter one ;D.
Lol, when you had Tsunade call and tell him he had another job, I was imagining Naruto walking in on Seiji-kun and Sono-san or something...lmao!
Did people really get pissed that you used the Sensitive Pornograph idea??
Fuck those bitches.
They're stupid.
You did specifically say that it wasn't YOUR idea, that you were just borrowing the idea and using different characters.
Anyway, I'll be checking back randomly to see if you've updated again.
:D

I love Sensitive Pornograph and i love your story.

i loved this! xDD ive seen SP with the pet sitter and as soon as i saw this fic name i just had to read it! great work

OMG!!!you updated!!!!
i love your posessive Naruto and submissive Sasuke...
please update soon~
can't wait for the new chap,grate work!!

yay, i'm glad you're continuing it! i *love* naruto being sasuke's master heheh, it's *so hot* gahh that bathroom fucking scene was drool worthy

it could use a once over for editing of typos and such, but not too bad; most noticeable i think were Akamaru and Temari's names being spelled wrong..

can't wait to see where the story goes ^__^
~ lg