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This is quite a new type of SasuNaru for me and I'm enjoying it so far. I'll be on the lookout for the next update.

Hina ^_^

Oh wow, you've been updating a lot! Not that I'm complaining, quite the opposite really. I positively love this story. I have to say though that the story is starting to seem kind of rushed. It feels like there was a scene or chapter missing between chapter 10 and 11. It just seems like it was a little too easy for Sasuke and Naruto to take their relationship to that next level, or rather it just seemed like it happened too quickly. In chapter 10 Naruto decided he wanted Sasuke. Then in chapter 11 they revealed that they loved each other. I just thought that because Sasuke is a “wolf”, and that before Naruto just wanted to fuck Sasuke and wasn’t in love with him, that Sasuke would be a little more wary about having sex with Naruto. I'm not saying that I'm lost in the plot line; I'm just saying that if you wanted to slow the pace down a bit, it wouldn't bring the fic down. Regardless of the pace though, I will be reading all your updates because I have to know how the fic ends. Regardless of all that though, my best wishes for you and your writing.


Dryad1789@hotmail.com

Great chapter!!! Hurry with the next one!!

Oi, that was great! But, I have a question....LOL...would that scene be considered a four-some?!

*Winks*...keep up the great work. I look forward to the next chapter.

Ja,
SeveredWIngs

And that, ladies and gentlemen, is a hot, hot, hot lemon for you... *applause*

ONG yay! That as really good, though at first I was like: Why is Sasuke being so touchy-feely? Resting his head on Naruto's shoulder and all.

But I guess it worked out in the end! I liked how you told the story about why Shiro was sealed in Sasuke and why Itachi killed the Uchiha.

Great job and update soon!

Grate fucking chapter I love this story is this going to be a Mpreg I hope so Sasuke aka Shiro swould be so cute prego. Hope ypu update soon and keep on writing!!!!!!!


P.S. Mpreg

Please oh please oh please oh please UPDATE!! I'm loving this! I love your writing style, it's so descriptive without being prose-y, and ARGH! I'm jealous! I wish I could write like you.

Oh my goodness, this seems to be my lucky week! Several of my favorite fics have finally updated after what has seemed like forever. I positively loved this chapter! It had everything: action, angst, drama, a little comedy, and of course, a dash or so of romance. I think you chose the perfect time to change the feeling of the fic ever so slightly. I like that Naruto has finally admitted his love because if Sasuke had to go through one more chapter, with his heart breaking, I think I would actually start to cry. At first I was bothered by how emo Sasuke was, but then after a few chapters and some thought it occurred to me that after coming back from Orrochimaru, Sasuke would be…lets say emotionally injured. Sasuke’s whole thing about being like a wolf and mating for life was utterly…adorable and romantic and yet sad at the same time.

I also really liked the addition of Shiro. Putting a….demon? inside Sasuke is original and really adds to the storyline, as well as taking the monotony out of it as well.

Anyway though, this was fantastic and I love this fic to death. I’m so glad that you updated and I wait with baited breath until the next one. My best wishes for you and your writing.



Dryad1789@hotmail.com

Kawaii!!!!!
Ohhhh I love howo this story is going, and finally Naruto knows about Shiro!