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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
8 and 9 were great, definitely worth the wait. I loved that little part in the beginning of chapter 8 about Kabuto shaving his legs.
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Sankyuu for updating! I really like the direction this fic is taking. Please continue the great work!
Ja,
Severedwings
Ja,
Severedwings
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Does that means that Naruto doens't hate Sasuke anymore! *sparkly eyes with hope* I looooooooved this chapter! It was so... so... sorry I can't manage to say how awesome it was, all the twists and Naruto finally understanding Sasuke *sniffs* I loved it
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful fic! Sorry that I didn't review for the other chapters. I really like this story. I've been looking for fics that have to do after Sasuke leaves Konoha because it kinda gets the mind thinking: "Hey maybe that could happen." I do feel sorry for Sasuke that he's lost one of his eyes. He's not perfect anymore, its kinda sad. I hope you update soon!
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October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*dreamy sigh* Sasuke is so cool *_*. The pity-not-sympathy thing with Naruto is starting to get to me though, so is the anger and feel of betrayal. It just seems so unlike Naruto to not feel empathy. Do we get to hear more about Shiro soon XP? Hehe, great chapter. Update soon!
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice update, Naruto seems to be realizing why Sasuke is back and is coming to some conculsions about how he feels. Keep up the good work.
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The ending was incredibly satisfying. I loved it.
Great chapter, the way you described their chase was really exciting. When will they find out about the demon in Sasuke? I really can't wait to see their reactions.
Awesome job and update soon, okay?
Great chapter, the way you described their chase was really exciting. When will they find out about the demon in Sasuke? I really can't wait to see their reactions.
Awesome job and update soon, okay?
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The chapter - seven - was great.
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. This is amazing. I love reading it over and over again while I wait for the next update. I always read these kid of stories in which Sasuke comes back from Orochimaru. and the way he deals with people and the way they deal with him. And you write all of this really well, which is such a relief. Many stories are really good (like yours) but the grammar or spelling is terrible. So good for you. This is an awesome story and I can't wait for the update. You have yourself another crazed fan and faithful reviewer. So kudos to you and this kick-ass story.
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love this fic. I can’t wait for Naruto and Kyubi to find out about Sasuke and Shiro. I love this pairing and I loved that they call Sasuke puppy! I laughed so hard at that. This is well written and I can’t wait for chapter 7. Update soon, onegai. Ja!