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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was good.
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mmmmmm... I don't like Sasuke-dono suffering... but, I think that you have a good reason for it, nd end up making up for all that, so I'll keep an eye on this, to see if I was right or not.
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I really, really like this story. ^^ Please, keep going!
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ehehe, that ending to the chapter was great. I love how you sneak the humor into the fic, it makes me smile. :D
Awesome job on this chapter, I liked the beginning with Sasuke's trail. "Old farts"... lol, I can just picture him saying that.
Update soon!
Awesome job on this chapter, I liked the beginning with Sasuke's trail. "Old farts"... lol, I can just picture him saying that.
Update soon!
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice.. it's different to read about a broken and abandoned Sasuke but i like this scenario very much.. because it's different!
I'm really looking forward to more.. this is getting interesting :)
I'm really looking forward to more.. this is getting interesting :)
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh....I love it! I really can't wait for another update. What you have done with Sasuke is refeshlingly original. His hopelessness is angsty, yet shines in a way that's uncomparable. He understands the way that others are treating him, and he accepts it.
The other thing I enjoyed was the way you redeemed Itachi. Most fanfics that I have read, where Itachi isn't an evil character, it's just like...POOF...hey look he is good now not bad. Atleast you have shown a believable reason why he would be a 'good' character.
I look forward to another installment. Take care.
Ja na,
SeveredWings
The other thing I enjoyed was the way you redeemed Itachi. Most fanfics that I have read, where Itachi isn't an evil character, it's just like...POOF...hey look he is good now not bad. Atleast you have shown a believable reason why he would be a 'good' character.
I look forward to another installment. Take care.
Ja na,
SeveredWings
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was good.
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good chapter, lots of snipets of info to entice us, well written, it seems Naruto's will to hate Sasuke is being tested. nicely done.
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter, I'm glad you updated. You had an interesting take on Sasuke's feelings towards Itachi and I like it! I don't think I've ever read something like that before but it could very well be true. Great idea!!
Can't wait till the next chapter. Update soon!
Can't wait till the next chapter. Update soon!
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, the update was short but good. If you have a thing for short chapters I think I will just have to wait to read the rest of this fic until you've finished it. I don't think I can bare the suspense, and I am in no way being sarcastic about that. I really like this story, so I hope you do finish it soon!
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