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for Endless Night

by Cepheus

person Anna
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I would probably lose it if I was on Naruto's position! Greaaat chapter, you definetly got me hooked. And fot the other thing! I prefer the Akatsuki one!
person BrucesGirl
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GREAT chapter. ^_^ I can't wait for the next installment. I'm really impressed with your abilities and grammar. Keep up the good work. Looking for the next one!
person littleolmee
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, liked how you had Naruto try to figure everything out around him that was wrong. The part with the 3rd Hokage was very heart-felt. I also liked how you had Naruto insulting Itachi and comparing him to Sasuke. Hope you keep with it, I'd like to see what you have in mind between those two and what will they do.
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter. the idea of itachi coming back sounds good to me. i can easily imagine the hell him and naru would have to put up with. the akatsuki!naruto one dpesn't appeal to me in the least. plus it seems like you'd have a lot more work to look foward to if you go that way. like what did naruto join for? could he really ever betray konoha? what is the akatsuki's purpose now that they would have naruto on their side? (assuming all of the other jinchuriki(sp?) were caputured) anyway, looking foward to your next update.
person fuu fuu fuu
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was good, I really liked it and I hope you do update it ^_^
person Anna
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok you got me hooked, I hate angst, I really do, but this seems to damn interesting for me to even care, even if it's supposed to be angst!
person ItachisHottie
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
need more!
person losthimagain
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O Sounds fun! ^^ Please update soon! Can Naru-chan be back to when Yondaime-sama was around?! I love my Yondaime! ^^
person littleolmee
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting start, I really like the idea of Naruto traveling back through time. Who are you planning on matching up with Naruto? Okay, since he is healing; it was just so slow, that must mean Kyuubi is still in him. But there is only 4 heads, so how far back did he go? Back to the Yondiame or is he already gone? Well, I do hope you stay with it, I love to see what you have in mind for the story.
littleolmee