rate_review Reviews

Nice job. There really should be more of this pair. 

I've read this story several times. I love it, Jiraiya is such a perv... a perfect perv! Good writing!

Not bad, I like pointless sex! Jiraiya is a horny bastard... this sounds about right for him. Keep writing! Keep them short if you're not sure, but keep writing.

There so should be more uke Orochimaru fics. He's so evil, he needs to be evil-he's fluffy! My fav character ^_^

Wo0t wo0t!! I am so happy to see someone writing this pairing. I love Orochimaru as uke. Your prep scene was great *giggle* yes Jiraiya was 'prepared' for his 'data-collecting'. Thanks for the story.

I like this, I really do and I would like to see more but it just seemed a little too short. Good though and Ji-san is a sneaky bastard. ^__^ I like.

Fuck....that was HOT! O///O

I soooooooooooooo salute you for doing this pair :3

Dios mio....an uke Orochimaru is a beautiful thing <3 Seriously. This pair needs to be immediately added to the Naruto( a myspace group )YaoiFanclub! Stat! ;)

Anyways- kudos darling, kudos!
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Hey! Oh my gosh, this was GREAT for your first fic, and what a GREAT pairing! I've always liked the more unusual pairings in Naruto, and this is certainly no exception! If you want to read MY Yaoi first fic, look it up under my screenname in the search engine here on AFF. It's called "The Division Between Velvet and Steel." Compare my first fic to the ones after that in the series. It sucked. LOL

The best advice I have to give you is to use more conjunctions. If your sentences are longer, it helps it flow easier in the human mind because for some reason, we tend to think in runon sentences. I have no idea why. But you know, this is a great start for your fiction career! I can't wait to see you develop more great stories.

Well, I must say this is the first story that I've read that has Orochimaru as uke and Jiraye as seme and I'm left impressed by it. Maa, I just wish you would have written more. Anyway, thanks again. Ja.