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i understand the plot and i can understand why you seem to have writer's block. If i were you i would just put it off to the side and think about it for a little while. Go back aad revamp the whole thing. But if you need help with it or anything if you deicde to redo it yourself you can drop me a line at my email. jazztaylor08@aim.com. Or of you would like me to take it over you can drop me a messege.

you really shouldnt have stopped it is such an amazing story and you write it so well :( :( :(

Well, I like this story. I’m not so sure that I’d be the best person to write it though. I’ve only been writing for about a year now. But if you’d like to consider me (and I’d be in no way offended if you turned me down) you can e-mail me at: MyCrimsonRose13@aol.com

As far as writing goes, I have an account here at AFF, and one at FFnet under the same name. My style usually differs, depending on the story -since every story had a different feel to it and I like to add a lot emotion into my work.

My flaws are that I use too many collage words when writing -apparently!(That‘s what several people have told me before...I don‘t know.)O.o Anyway it‘s an expendable flaw. Also, I don’t work well under pressure, so updates don’t happen as fast as I (or the reader) would like.

My pros are that I have co-written pieces before. So I’m comfortable in writing specific things if you had certain events that you wanted to happen in the story (even though you‘d be no longer writing it). I can either work with you idea’s or create my own, it make’s no difference to me. Also, I’m a bit eccentric with my plots. Most of the time I like to add a little twist to the story that makes it stand out (that way it’s not too monotonous). Moreover I have the tendency to write in detail; though I’m not sure if that’s a pro or a con??? (laughs)

So, yeah. If your interested let me know. I could even type up a quick prototype of the next chapter if you wanted. That way you could see first hand how I write (my style/skill) and if you’d feel comfortable enough in letting me continue.

Until later... or not ^^
Crimson2006

Oh, this story is really good. You should finish it!!!!
It's ok if you don't update all the time, just work on it when ever you can. ^^
I would really love to read more.
Still, if you can't then I understand.
Good luck on finding someone to help you!^_^

good, sad... mean, but good! So very intriging! I like it! And I hope you'll update soon. This is good.

Inus_Kagome_forever

woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Must conitue!!!!! Sasuke You just realized you were gay?!?!?!
How troublesome.....I WANT MORE...XD

OK, I like your story but something is bothering me, the names.
Here, Last Name First Name:
Uchiha Sasuke (This is right and Naruto too)
Uzumaki Naruto
Nara Shikamaru
Hatake Kakashi
Umino Iruka
(And just in case they show up later...)
Haruno Sakura
Yamanaka Ino
Akimichi Chouji (or Choji)
Aburame Shino
Hyuuga Hinata
Hyuuga Neji
Inuzuka Kiba
Rock Lee
____ Tenten (She doesn't have a last name)

Email me as JakotsuHajime2@aol.com if you need any more, I've got them all. (Sorry for being a pain in the ass)

AWSEOM FIC!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!

i like this story

I loved Naruto in the boy's bathroom. I kept wondering if the janitor would walk in on him or someone else. Then when it went to Sasuke's point of view and he was in the locker room watching Naruto shower, I spit my drink and almost died. I love that. I wanted him to join Naruto in the water, but you probably have something planned.

Good work on this second chapter. Seriously liked it a lot.

I'm worried now on what's going to happen to Naruto.