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for Pride and Lust

by Findabhair

person blisblop
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ha ha.You are so funnny ! This a take off of under age fan fiction?You have the utter lack of real heat but loads of cliche down perfectly,even the reveiw demand for what? is cool.Fist...I can't wait,I bet it will be done in less than five sentences.rave on.
person Raine
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol that's cute i like the ending.
is it a one-shot or is there more to come.
Well either way it was good. and if there are more chapters
Update soon K!!!

^_^
person Mija
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooh this was good, is this a one shot or will there be more with hopefully a lemon??? (hint-hint) yes I am a perv and I likes my lemons lol, but truelly this was good and I liked it, would love to kow if there will be more, if not it was a good one shot, but I do hope it was just a start, ty for the read, I reallly enjoyed it and I loved the last part, you did it now dobe...now Naruto was his hehe, too good I loves a possesive Sasuke baby hehe, again ty, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)