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by emeraldfire84

person unknown
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ha! it's so corny that it's hilarious
the way u got kakashi and sakura to do it in the first part of the first chatper totally reminded me of His Fault from fanfiction.net (also a kakasaku)
XD
and the "harder" and deeper part got me totally laughing! cause like, just yesterday, i was putting up the plastic green net fences for the moon festival and we had to hammer down supporters right? one of my friends was like, "harder! faster!" XD i was laughing to no end!
do u also write on fanfiction.net? cause i remember reading something similar to this plot.. XD
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sooooooo good. I really liked this story. I can't believe that it was your first. Kakashi/Sakura pairings are one of my favorites, so I was very pleasantly surprised when I looked at your author profile and found that you had done this one. PLEASE add another chapter...I'll beg like Sakura in the 2nd chapter if I have to. I will, really. :)
person Sardina
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Both chapter are excellent. Please do more KakaSaku in the future, you're amazing writing them.
person Night
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
REALLY ENJOY EADING THIS AND SORRI FOR THE CAP WELL HOPE THERES GOING TO A PART THREE BYE!!
person Anon
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was really cute and hot all at the same time.

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
person Ave
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh dear gods. IF THERE IS NO PART 3 I WILL SURELY DIE! and you wouldn't want one of your dear reviewers to die would you?? this is seriously the hottest bestest sexiest kakasaku EVER. although i preferred part one because well...masculine kakashi is just...plain...hot..
haha and i like how sakuras becoming pervy too.
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow!! this was awesome and very hott! i loved it!! i believe a third installment is in order! lol i'm totally hooked!!
person Sanity
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh...myyy...god...

I just about DIED reading this. I /like/ your portrayal of Sakura as a woman finally coming in to her own. ...and maybe because KakaSaku = LOVE.

Pleasepleaseplease continue!

...or are you waiting for the readers to beg?
person koham
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DAMN!!....that was like sooo AWSOME!!!...i had a hard time getting my eyes off the screen!....u r an incredible writer!!...this was like one of the most hottest kaka/saku fics i've ever read!!....U SHOULD DEFINATELY CONTINUE IT!..(PLEASEEE..)
i'll be looking forward to ur updates....SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!...
and...KEEP UP THE AWSOME WORK! ^_^
-koham-
person darksoul
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man....r u waiting for us to beg or what..?
grrr...CONTINUE IT ALREADY!!....like this's probably THE most 'awsomest' kaka/saku fics i've ever read!!
so quit torturing us...and give us 'MORE'...lol....
i'll be waiting for the next update....and u better UPDATE SOON!...(even though i don't think i can wait...)
p.s ur fic definately rocks!..so rock on!