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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice, very nice. For a first story, that rocked, heck, for a 100th story that rocked. Keep them coming, as they can only get better. Great job and thanks for sharing.
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Some light reading indeed! Very well written. Hot lemon. All in all an enjoyable read.
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
realy......interesting. please write more , realy enjoyed the plot
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Rawr! Loved this. After reading all those books and the fact that he's an elite shinobi? He's got to be a sexual god. He just has to be! I loved the fact that you made him have stamina too. Naruto might have stamina in fighting but Kakashi's got it where it counts! LOL. Great job! Really enjoyed the read. x3
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
One of the best one-shots I've ever read. I love how you put in a small back story to explain how they got together and didn't just say something like 'all of a sudden they fell madly in love and made out'.
The part when Kakashi made her read while he was renacting was hot on so many levels. Good job! I shall look for you in the future so I hope you write more.
The part when Kakashi made her read while he was renacting was hot on so many levels. Good job! I shall look for you in the future so I hope you write more.
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what can I say HOT. I look forward to reading your future works. Good job. Take care and god bless.
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
all I can say is cold shower here I come!! Damn that was hot and spicy! Write some more! And yes I am 20 and my mother would still disapprove.
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was absolutely amazing!!!....one of the most awsome kaka/saku fics i've ever read....though i was wondering...is it a one-shot?....or r u gonna continue it?....caz it'd be awsome if u do...
anyway.....i love ur fic...u should definately consider writing more kaka/saku in future!!...keep up the awsome work!!....and i'll be looking forward to ur fics in future!
-koham-
anyway.....i love ur fic...u should definately consider writing more kaka/saku in future!!...keep up the awsome work!!....and i'll be looking forward to ur fics in future!
-koham-
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good and creative! Love it!!!