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WOW!! That is someof the hottest thigns I read in that last chapter. You truly have a gift in writing! BTW, did you come up with that strawberry stuff yourself? Pretty kinky...LOL. I look forward to the rest of the story and I'm totally eager to see how it all ends (although I hope it doesn't)

(low whistle) damn... damn, damn, damn. That... was... HOT! Whew, need to take a cold shower. I love this story. It's so insanely sexy and curiously humorous. I can't wait to read more.

!!! Happy new year!!!! This chapter really was HOT! It was brilliant and no doubt alot of work!

Every time I read one of your stories, I want to give a coherent review -- but JEEZUS I end up not knowing how to start! However, I do end up mumbling something like, “Damn her to Hades cuz this stuff’s good”! But I’ll say this – the feather and chocolate strawberry scenes were VERY EROTIC touches! I think that’s why I like your writing – you know how to mix the “erotic” with the “raunch” and you don’t hold back in your descriptions. Oh and one more thing I got to get out of my system – Bad Princess! Naughty Princess! Bad-naughty! Naughty-bad! And PLEASE keep writing on AdultFiction.net

Uh, hello. This is like one of a handful of het stories I find as HOT as some of the best male/male pieces. BRAVO~! You give GREAT pron. Thanks!

THAT WAS SO SWEET AND ROMANCE IT MADE ME WANT TO CRY WELL DONE!!

Wow. This fic is just amazing so far. You use such vivid descriptions of everything that goes on between Sakura and Kakashi. Suffice to say I love it. Chapter 4 was especially amazing. Keep up the good work and I hope you'll have chapter 5 up soon. =)

!!!! Omeegosh!!! BRILLIANT!!! Luving the smut and lemons!

Wow <3 I love all of your Naruto stories and can't get enough of them, lemons or no, you have got such a great talent for writing that I feel like stalking personal information outa` you and then whiping you till you updated until completion. Then I'd whip you till you wrote a novel or something, cause I'm telling you, you have the potential as a author to do so! Your books would be kick-ass best sellers. =D

Your faithful Reader,
Rlp
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i dont think i said it in my last review, but this is one of the hottest things you have ever written. It was absolutely amazing, i had tears in my eyes...not really cuz thats kinda creepy. Party of Three's always been my favorite but this chapter might have changed my mind, lol...alot of these people are getting impatient...next thing yu know you'll be getting messages like 'update or else!', scaaaary. Well, i was just kinda sad that i haven't updated in forever and im looking forward to the next chapter, in all your stories