schedule
August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very nice. it to soon to decide for sure but if you keep this uo you will have a grade A fic
schedule
August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
by the way, TerraChrono is wrong, japanise can and is often used in fanfiction and sometimes even english translations of jap-anime. and is also used to create a solid visual (like when you use Gomen to meke Sakura cute). besides when you use japanese you are commemorating the source of the fiction you are taking from.
PS. if terraChrono reads this, its nothing personal, i just dissagree with you
PS. if terraChrono reads this, its nothing personal, i just dissagree with you
schedule
August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nicely written, like the idea and well, I enjoyed it ;)
schedule
August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the first chapter. You are going to add more right? So far it's not really an Nc17 rating, more PG.