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yay! another chapter! i was surprised to see this story here even though i was the one who suggested it ^_^;; and i love the introduction of kakashi, that was brilliant. i can't wait for the next chapter! update soon!

... Okay. So, straight up? YOU OWN. Majorly. I can't help but fall in love with a vampiric Sasuke. e_e; This coming from a guy that HATES Sasuke. :D Good job, you do well. ^.^ Onto the actual critique~

I really really like the idea of this story. The description is great and you're doing a wonderful job of portraying the characters. I love your use of vocabulary; mixing in the small Japanese bits and uncommon English words is just... refreshing. Very much so. There are little to no typo's that I can point out - a few grammatical errors, such as punctuation and stuff (but we all know that the comma and semi-colon is America's worst enemy ^^;;) but that's just about as far as that goes.

If you're ever interested in a beta, I gladly offer my services. I'm rather fast about editing and I do an efficient job of it; that, and this story makes me happy in the pants. n_n Soooo... just some food for your thought. My offer stands, and you can accept it or refuse it.

Again!! I love this story so much. Just... everything. The storyline, the background history, how you're able to get right into Naruto's head even in third person~ not to mention the title caught me right away while I was browsing. I just thought "Seize the jugular? Sounds vampir---- aha, it is!! Joy! -click-" and you had me hooked with the first paragraph. .___. No lies, my friend.

Sorry for the long-winded review, but really, ya gotta know that I'm like, a devoted fan now. Even though I just stumbled across this story today. ^^;

Keep up the good writing, and let your muses dance for you!

~J

Oh lord, this story like the first chapter, actually scared me enough that I had to turn my light on and shit! lol great job! Love it, always have loved vampire stories! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOON!! *begs*

OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS STORY I WISH YOU WOULD UPDATE FASTER, BUT I RATHER HAVE LESS CHAPTERS AND BETTER QUALITY!!! PLEASE CONTIUNE!!!

hehe, iruka heard them. i wonder how he's gonna keep sasuke from violating naruto. hmm....

update soon, please?

-inc

Its really really good - plot and writing - and like most of your fans I wish it was possible to tie you up to your desk and chair so you'll have to constantly write for our entertainment...of course it is only a thought and I have NO wish to really bind you to furinture (depends where the story goes...LOL). Anyways, I felt I HAD to comment because of how you incorporated Iruka in the story. I am a BIG BIG fan of Iruka and Naruto's paternal/faternal relationship, and I encourage more of that storyline. Can't wait to read your next update - and hopefully that will be soon. ciao, yks

i've been waiting for an update for this story! oh, and now mother-hen iruka's got it in his head that naruto doesn't want what's going down. tsk, tsk. anyway, great chapter! i can't wait for an update! you know, i would suggest posting this puppy in the male/male category. they have AUs there (hell, i have AUs there), and i think you'd get a lot of feedback there.

anway, keep up the great work!

That was fun, nice job! You combined the whole vampire thing and school setting nicely.

Love your story, I love vampire stories. Can't wait for it to get all hot between the two. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter, hope it's soon.

OMG! poor Naruto!!lol
i love your story.
can't wait untill you update, keep up your great work!