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by emeraldfire84

schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and its Kisame, NOT "Shark"
person edelta88
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry I don't care what you do no one breaks that quickly when they have a reason to resist.

regardless it's good
person clan_destine
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a good read, not too long, and with my fave pairings of UchihaxSakura. You're right, it did get a little too sugary at the end with an OOC Sasuke, but then Itakun is dead. I also liked your portrayal of Itachi and Sakura. Your action chapters were descriptive and the sex scenes are good too (especially liked your other fic with OroSakuSasu coughIamapervertcough). I especially like how you integrate your storylines/plots with sex since that makes it more interesting compared to pure porn without plot. If I could make a recommendation, it's probably that you explore the less salubrious side of sex - given your writing skills, you'd probably be able to write bondage/darker fics etc really well o_o.
person nanatsunade
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story!! :) I kind of had a hard time with the mental and physical rape of Sakura, but the way you finished the story was just beautiful..I keep going back and reading it over and over again. Keep up the good work, okay?
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I will be saving this one to my favorites. Very good.
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your plot was well paced. I loved the psychological aspects. Itachi is CREEPY in your rendition, very true to form. You kept all the characters believable, and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
person RadgarEleding
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Incredible. Absolutely and astonishingly incredible!!! The characters are portrayed so perfectly, and I love how
Itachi met his end at the hands of those he arrogantly underestimated. While most of the parts with Itachi were
pretty sick and twisted, it was an awesome read and I hope to enjoy another of your great fics. some time soon.
Wonderful job, 10/10

--Radgar
person poornmiserable
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aaawwww that was sweet...a little disappointed that naruto wasn't included and had to settle for second best but hey what can i do....great job on this fic and as always your stories are a pleasure to read keep up the good work and i hope to see more of your fics
person Cookie
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I actually have mixed feelings about the ending. First of all, I’m sorry it has to end – I really enjoyed all the chapters. And I’m sorry Itachi died (I can’t believe I actually saying this – I loved your portrayal of him as such a sexy bastard of a brother!). The ending was also a bit on the sweet side, but I’m glad Sakura finally had her romantic outcome with Sasuke. So I can see why the sweetness was necessary – Sasuke had to prove to Sakura that he was not like Itachi despite he past harshness. I was also very sweet he did a little healing himself (I did like that part!). Very sexy job overall though!
person Nelly
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! It was ooc but it was the perfect ending to a great story!