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for Let Me In

by emeraldfire84

person me
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cant say im 100% happy with this chapter..but maybe thats my hentai demon talkin again..gotta get a muzzle over that beastie..guess i was waiting so long for a J-Pop hime lemon that i was sorta disappointed, but other than my completely unsatisfied and deprived hormone-ran teenage body..it was a really good chapter..nice visual description, portrayed character emotions really well, very angsty, and naruto practically had me in tears..bravo!

ps: still..my completely unsatisfied and deprived hormone-ran teenage body is still hopin the next chappie will you kno.. -nudge- -nudge- *wink* *wink*
person me
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh..and update..soon..again
person Sakuar Blossom101
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O OMG! please update asap!
person morwen re
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
... that was mean... but good! please tell me that something will make inner sakura jump out of her hole? please? and don't let naruto die or else i'll really cry. update again soon!
person mel
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What! You can't leave me hanging like that, it's too cruel. I need to know how this ends. Please update soon.
person Anya
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cookies!* Update! We demands update! This is a very good story, I wasn't sure if I would enjoy it, being Itachi/Sakura torturesque, but I did and now I'm very excited to see what happens. Ooo, will Sakura go back to good? Will she get even with Sasuke? Will she be a bad girl and help Itachi fight Sasuke and Naruto? ooooo ^_^
person Serina
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story and I am enjoying it immensely. The tricking of Kakashi is brilliant and the smut is very well done. It's nice to see ItaSaku that isn't all out torturous rape where she ends up battered and bleeding and nearly dead. I'm more of a fan of SasuSaku and can't wait to see more of their interaction, however I hope Sasuke doesn't get twisted into a love struck silly boy. I certainly couldn't see him telling Sakura feelings of love, even if he starts to treat her better. Actions do speak louder though, and Sasuke is a man of action and less talk. I also imagine the mental reprogramming would have it's ramifications on Sakura's feelings towards Sasuke. Even possible fears of him hurting her.
person me
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
COME OOONNN!!!! IV BEEN WAITING FOR WEEEEEKS!!!
person Karista N
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amazingly well-written Itachi! Although not cannon (who can say what is, though, so little is known about him), you've captured him just as I'd imagine...dark, sexy, psychotic. I love how you didn't just throw Sakura into his world, that you let her come back to her senses occasionally...much more realistic given her improvements in the future. I'm looking forward to more!
person unspoiledrini
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn this is a good fic. I almost hate the fact that sakura has to return to team 7. update soon ok. i want to see sasuke get what he deserves.