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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*feeds the author* I really love this story, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Huuuugs*
Beautiful
Wonderful
Addicting
Please write more!
Beautiful
Wonderful
Addicting
Please write more!
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't lose heart, sugar. Maybe readers are a little stumped as to what to say.
Hmmm... For this chapter I like the details you went into how Sakura's mind was being broken. Sure the Inner Sakura bit was rather quickly done away wit, but otherwise, it was very detailed. It makes it easy to see and empathize with what would otherwise be a standard plot device (brainwash one friend into kiling another). So... Good job! Hope to see the upcoming confrontation.
Hmmm... For this chapter I like the details you went into how Sakura's mind was being broken. Sure the Inner Sakura bit was rather quickly done away wit, but otherwise, it was very detailed. It makes it easy to see and empathize with what would otherwise be a standard plot device (brainwash one friend into kiling another). So... Good job! Hope to see the upcoming confrontation.
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's kinda disappointing to see Inner defeated so easily, I was kinda hoping she'd kick Itachi's ass (or at least give him a migrane), looking forward to the next chapter, hopefully Sakura'll get him back for this.
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
JUBILATIONS! An update!! *cheers*
I was wondering when Itachi would resort to that lil trick of his to break down Inner Sakura!
Great update! Can't wait for the next one!
I was wondering when Itachi would resort to that lil trick of his to break down Inner Sakura!
Great update! Can't wait for the next one!
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
j-pop hime..you. are. my. hero. i loooooove this story..ALMOST as much as i love party of three..but trust me, with a few more updates im sure itll be up there. PLLLLEEEAAASEE update regularly like yu did for chpt 7 nd 8. Oh and about you NOT updating becuz yu dont get enuff reviews..well, yeah, just ask nd ill review 10 times everyday, dead serious.
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I just hope that there will be SasuSaku really soon! But good job so far!
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome!! I love it. Great job! :)
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! The story keeps getting better and better, it doesn't matter how long you take. Because it is soooooo worth the wait!!!
Itachi it just too evil, Man Sasuke is in for a BIG surprise!!
Itachi it just too evil, Man Sasuke is in for a BIG surprise!!
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i mean chpt 4 and 5 :D