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for Obsession in the Dark

by sasunaru2006

person Spindy
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved your fic... however, will you upload ND UPDATE YOUR OTHER FICS FROM FF.NET? i REALLY LOVED THE "All For You"!
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow -what a good smutty side story! I'm surprised that there aren’t that many reviews for this sasunaru fic, but I'm glad I found such a hot smexy one-shot like this one! I'd totally read more of your stories if you're ever going to write up another one! Email me if you ever decided to post up another sasunaru fic! ^_^
person Neko-Chan
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL!!! awesome ending ^_^ so Kakashi
Great smutness!!
person spriggan
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man i loved this little one-shot. i swear, when it comes to naruto and sasuke, kakashi is such a pervert. nice job on this. ^.^
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'd say the guys were a little bit OOC, and I noticed a few clichés, but the magnificent lemon really made up for it.:D Outstanding, I can't believe this was your first lemon scene. Keep on rolling!
person Flippy
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i realy liked the beginning but i think u went down hill when you added WAFF. It felt like a gay duo chick flick. But i loved the sexy hottness of the lemon erm...keep up the great fics!!!
person littleolmee
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
For a first lemon you did really good. Like how you used the newest manga for your setting. Kakashi and Yamata's part made me laugh, especially when Kakashi said he was staying to watch to make sure it wasn't rape again. Lol. Good job.