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by Inigeshi

schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing story but SERIOUSLY needs to be edited. Some sentences just degenerate into jibberish. Reread through you'll notice.
person Anon
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
gREAT STORY, USUALLY I DON'T HYUUGACEST FICS BUT THIS ONE REALLY CHANGED MY MIND ESPECIALLY SINCE HINATA IS DOMINANT I REALLY THINK I LIKE HER THIS WAY MUCH BETTER.
i'M LOOKING FORWARD TO THE SEQUEL AND PRE ONE HOPE I GET TO READ THEM SOON.
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hinata-sama is te best! jajaja, Neji is so fun in this story, anyway, just one thing, it's Gaara, not Garra. Take care!
person Hestia
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is getting more twisted--it looks like you are heading for some major group sex here . . . I'm a big Gaara/Neji fan, so hey, I'm looking forward to that! Thanks for posting!
person A True Dreamer
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhh okay gaara really does care... :]] interesting
person Pastel
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love this. Update soon please.
person Hestia
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow--I love the two new chapters since I last read this! Go Hinata! Awesome--keep up the great work!
person Aoidragon
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:P ive been waiting for this next chappy! O_o but now i wanna know what happens next! ah, the cruelty!!!! please update soon!
person Hestia
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Hinata as a top to Neji's bottom--brilliant! Please update soon!
person Aoidragon
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ha ha.... interesting. please update soon... i'd like to see where this goes ;)