rate_review Reviews

Damn that was amazing. You managed to write some awesome smut filled lemony goodness while still being able to actually have a story and I can tell that you're a very good writer. Please write more narusaku lemons!

5 stars great story!

I liked it! Go Naruto!! You made him out to be very sexy and strong at the beginning then lead to his always Dobe self, but not to dense. I really liked it. Great job!!

Chapter 4 - Oh yummy. I love clone sex. Fantastic chapter.

And the last chapter........Very cute (yes Sakura you should try to have the clone gang bang on the bed next time). And poor Hinata and Naruto will always be clueless to her reactions to him. Lovely story - thanks for writing.

Chapter 3 - “Ok, but I still think Sai is gay, and if he’s not gay, he’s a moron because your penis is not small. As a medic, I can state that with authority. “

“Yea, well, my penis isn’t usually so excited when I’m around Sai,” said Naruto.

“Good, keep it that way!” said Sakura sliding a hand possessively up and down said penis.

So many wonderfully funny lines in this chapter. I loved Ino's observation that Sai was wrong about the size of Naruto's penis too.
I also enjoyed the discussions on whether Sai is gay or not (I agree with Kohaku Shadow's observation that Sai is as fruity as a bag of skittles).

Chapter one - Loved the inner Sakura dialogue. And the sex scene was fantastic (as always). Now I'll go read the rest.

Chapter 2 - Loved the use of a bra as a gag and desk sex, oh yummy.

Bwaahahhahahahahhahahahahahahh haahahahahhah ahehewhehehheheahahzhahhehe hehehehehehehhe ^^^^^^^^ eeee!

That was fantastic. God. I think every good relationship needs a good deal of embarrassment, don't you? hehehe

Keep up the good work!

Huggles! that was such a wonderful story. Just deliightful smutty goodness. Now i have a new fantasy to be made into reality :)