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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
BRILLIANT .:gives cookie:.
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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story was very good. i loved the clones! so awesome. ive actually been reading alot of ur stories latly ad i love them all. they're soo good ^^ u seem to be a big fan of master/slave scenes. ill admit i am too. lolz. oh and by the way i wanted to ask if u played theninja-rpg.com.... just a random question..^^ email me back
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I just love this story no matter how many times I read it...
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April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooowwww, sweeeet. I think the last chapter could have been extended a little bit but that is just my sick need for a tiny bit of angst speeking.
Thank you!
Thank you!
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March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good. Is Sakura a virgin? Because I don't like when Naruto gets "sloppy seconds."
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February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is this complete now?
30 out of 30. You rule the school of hot.
Gangbangupjob mate
And very funny too, poor Hyuuga girl though. I like both NaruSaku and NaruHina, so it always puts a frown on my face when that happens..
And that gives me an idea.. Someone needs to do a NaruSakuHina!!!!
30 out of 30. You rule the school of hot.
Gangbangupjob mate
And very funny too, poor Hyuuga girl though. I like both NaruSaku and NaruHina, so it always puts a frown on my face when that happens..
And that gives me an idea.. Someone needs to do a NaruSakuHina!!!!
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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This fic was awesome. I liked how you make Sakura so aggressive. I also liked that you didn't make Sakura a slut that has slept around a lot of times (I don't like those kinds of fics) I liked the ones that Naruto takes her virginity.
I really hope you make a sequel or at least make another NaruSaku fic.
I really hope you make a sequel or at least make another NaruSaku fic.
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This would be yet another reader who hates the word pussy. It isn't romantic AT ALL. It's crude, blunt, and not at all in sync with the otherwise romantic air of your story. Cunt is even worse.
Center would work as an alternative. Find a thesurus and search alternate terms that are less crude. Also, variation is a good thing. You used the same word over and over, which just gets old.
Really, aside from that, the story itself was good. You're a good writer. Just that word made me cringe, every time.
Center would work as an alternative. Find a thesurus and search alternate terms that are less crude. Also, variation is a good thing. You used the same word over and over, which just gets old.
Really, aside from that, the story itself was good. You're a good writer. Just that word made me cringe, every time.
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am trying hard not to cry from laughing so much as I write. This was hot and funny! I loved it! Very, very much! I didnt see anything wrong with your vocabulary. Pussy and cunt are two words that feel right when you are in the mood for them. The people not seeing this, really should try to get in the mood themselves. There is such a thing as repressed you know. I think the use of those words was correct given her highly aroused state and the savage hunger you described she had. So, it was all good!
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That.... was amazing *_____* I think it's the second time I've read it, but I think it was very well written, and the plot... well.... we don't really need plot, but what plot there was, was well placed :D!
Great Job, totally adored it~! :D
~Lyn
Great Job, totally adored it~! :D
~Lyn