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for Make Me Forget

by Hestia

person GoNeKr@zY
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That.... was fucking Orgasmic!!! Please don't stop!!!! MORE!!!! I NEED MORE!!!!
person solar phoenix
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was kind of short compared to your other chapters, but still good. I hope there's more coming soon.
person Hillary (Ryokomaru)
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yaaaa more more more
person puckreathof
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was inspiring and hilarious. Not enough is made of the Kage Bunshin gang-bang.
person Zendura
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
niiiice Kage Bushin for the WIN!!!!! you must do details!!!
person tsukashi
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, You had me positively ROLLING with laughter this chapter! I'm going to check out your new story tomorrow! Great job!
person logophobia
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
kicks so much ass i red it twice.
person Katharine
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is so good! I would really like to see the plot continues and watch what happens in their relationship. Keep up the good, no great work!
person Hillary (Ryokomaru)
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooooo i want more
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, the cliffhangers, they kill! I was actually wondering when Naruto was going to go for using his clones. Looking forward to seeing the update.