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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice story..... keep it up
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i am so enjoying this fic! sweet, raunchy and funny all in one. what more can i ask for? keep it up - i'm looking forward to more. ;P
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love the fic, i don't realy care which way you head with this. i just want more lol.
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice update soon
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story but when did everything take place. How many years after the Chunnin Exams and I like to read more of this story with or without you choose when to have them go at it like rabbits or foxes and what if n what not. Keep up the great work ...... I love it so far. What about Hinata who is she going to go after since her main crush is taken by his crush....
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude that is such a hott idea (about all the clones)!!! Please write about what happens!!
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol now im in the mood to do a Narutoxsakuraxhinata...weird, anyways that was good! keep writing so i can ceep reviewin!
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is a seriously well written PWP. It has just the right balance of humor, dialogue and of course action to keep it interesting without being vulgar. It's funny how there were so many ideas here that I had wanted to explore in my ongoing story, but you got to them first. :P Anyways, awesome updating pace, and I look forward to yet another chapter of lemony goodness! ^^
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great pairing! This story is awesome, can't wait for the next chapter.
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to see more lemon action, but devoid of clones. I've read plenty of "shadow clone orgy" stories and they just don't work for me.