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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is awsome. please write more its sex scenes and plot are awsome. its one of the only good naru saku ones out there
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update soon and wrigt what happend good luck
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holly crap that was one of the best lemons i've read in a long long time. Yes please continue if u think u can I would love to see where u brought this story. I would also like to see how good ur writing is when ur not just writing sex.
Because I Can
Because I Can
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
if there's more to this story, I look forward to reading it.
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story but what's going to happen later on with those two. I hope you make this a longer story and more interesting. I like the way everything is going for them right now and I hope you update this to be at least 10 or more chapters how about that for a helpful boost for you. Keep up the writings and hope to see more of your writings too....
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mpore please! I need more..... 2 chapters ain't enough.
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
kick ass! update soon!
it is an awesome story!
it is an awesome story!
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, I don't know if I'm just a little odd in finding the word pussy vulgar, especially when reading a lemon, but I do. If it were only once or twice it would be ok, but that word popped up about a dozen times. A few alternate suggestions (varying for which part you speak of): nether region, cavern, sheath, sex, bundle of nerves, button, slit, folds.
Overall, this was an AWESOME read. Hottest lemon that I have read in a long time. There was the unresolved feelings between the two of them, so I am hoping for a continuance. Naruto is obviously feeling/thinking the same way that Sakura is with all the same insecurities. You do a great job of showing that too, btw. I don't even know if your grammar, etc was good or not, ^_- (too caught up in the lemon)
Overall, this was an AWESOME read. Hottest lemon that I have read in a long time. There was the unresolved feelings between the two of them, so I am hoping for a continuance. Naruto is obviously feeling/thinking the same way that Sakura is with all the same insecurities. You do a great job of showing that too, btw. I don't even know if your grammar, etc was good or not, ^_- (too caught up in the lemon)
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol! That was probably the most graphic, Naru/Saku story I've ever read. Wasn't bad, just very straight to the point. Hope to see more NaruSaku from you. You certainly have a different way of painting it. *^^*