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for Make Me Forget

by Hestia

person akasha
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome!! i totally love naruto's little quip at the end about taking her face-down. it just seems like something that he would say. i love it! will there be any follow-up on this story? i don't read too much naru/saku stuff, but i like this one.
person mel
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story, and a think another chapter would be great. It could cover the thoughts in Naruto's head so a better perspective could be formed.
person ainy1985
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I totally LOVED it!
The moment when Sakura revealed her desires to Naruto - that's the thing I love most - how sweet Uzumaky is, hearing such a confession, so confused, but willing to get what he's proposed!)))

I hope to read the following chapters soon. Good luck! ^____~

person BlackOptimism
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I could really care less if it had the word "pussy" in it alot. But my friends say pussy a lot so it doesn't effect me.

But I really liked it! Nice job! It would have been a nice affect if like Naruto ripped off his shirt or something. I need to find a fic like that.
person yaoifan
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good...this is the first sakunaru ff iv ever read, very nice continue...
person Anon
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what fun, a bit of creative writing in between research papers eh?
person James
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NICE
person narusaku_69
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sweet. update soon please :)
person rockhard
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bitchin' story. You are able to get right to the depth of the characters sensual and sexual needs. Great use of language too. Not a noobie sort of writing style.

You leave me, well.... Rockhard
person rockhard
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow - can't believe Naruto asked her to marry him. So was the sex that good for him? Or was there more to it? What's the back story to persaude him to go that far?

I remain, for you, Rockhard