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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
there is so much you can write about like...(i dont think sasuke is back) so write about him...having feelings for sakura and naruto backing away because he still doesn't believe her... go sakunaru!!!
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
meeeps! I LOVE it, please, if not for anyone else, please write more for me!!!!
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Kira
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Kira
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
expand! more! :)
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good work! I like it!
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Even better!
Seems like they'll be at it for at least eight more hours...
Seems like they'll be at it for at least eight more hours...
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. You've really made me love the Sakura/Naruto pairing. I definately think that you should continue.
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Personally, I love it. NaruSaku needs more lemons. They seem well out of character but then again, Kisimoto doesn't go into anyone's sexuality. I'd like to see you make a story outta this instead of just a sex scene. Seems like you could do it well.
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it, I think you should continue
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you didn't use that word this chapter, hehe. Personally, I think this stands as it is. It's hot, it's sweet, it's kinda kinky and most importantly, IT'S HOT! heh. I'd rather see another Naru/Saku in a different situation. Totally unrelated thought: I wonder if the clones are able to get a girl pregnant?
Anyway, whichever route you choose, keep up the great work!
Anyway, whichever route you choose, keep up the great work!