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Fantastic job! I love it so far! You’re a very good writer, please update as soon as humanly possible!

god I am lazy....to sign in..but it's me protogirl from AFF.net ^_^

anyway, the second part was a bit confusing...did Gaara really do it? I was expecting something like, "Yeah I did it because I need love and affection, and I dunno how to express it!" or something something

this so could have been a gailee XD

but still the lemon was nice and I really want to see more

....which is why I am reading chapter 3! XD

*muses* Interesting. So when will you be updating next? I'm on this site because for some reason I cannot access Fanfiction.net at the moment, much to my everlasting annoyance. Yes, I like both sites. Fanfiction.net has really good crossover fanfics, but for the some reason the authors ALMOST never finish them! And there are some other kinds. My favorite fandoms at the moment are Naruto, Ranma 1/2 and Shaman King...Anyway, Hangover is a strange title for this chapter, but i see your point. So who is the rapist? I find it hard to believe Gaara would rape those women-well I explained my reasons. And I have other one-the sand-Leaf alliance treaty would fall apart. And i doubt he would risk that.

read this part as well; interesting concept and how things are turing out! (*realizes that her say of words are....crappy* -___-;;;;)

but yeah, it makes sense that gaara really wouldn't understand the concept of love ^_^ and I like how lee is handling it.

cannot wait to see more; also like how the title reflects the chapter as well as the lemons XD

wouldn't mind seeing like an aftermath story/chapter or how things fall into place

Thanks for the reviews guys! I really appreciate each and every one. <3<3<3

Shinigami24: I may update this sometime in the next few days. I'd love to work on this today but in an hour I have somewhere to go. About the rapist thing, don't worry about it, everything will fall into place. Also, in the next chapters I am planning to include more interaction and storyline with Kakashi and the shinobi.
I could give a little spoiler about the serial rapist but I don't want to ruin the story. Perhaps I'll have that revealed in the next chapter. ^-^

This seems to be one of those stories in which you have to read the whole thing to fully understand it. Personally I hate movies that go about that way(Like the Butterfly Effect), and I didn't do this intentionally. But as long as readers don't lose interest in the story early on then I'll be happy. :3

Weird! Nearly my entire comment was cut out! Grr...oh well I guess I'll have to rewrite this.

Shinigami24: I plan to update sometime within the next few days. If possible I'll work on it today, but at the moment I don't have the time. In the upcoming chapter I plan to include more interaction with Kakashi and the other shinobi. And I will also put in more information regarding the serial rapist(I don't want to ruin the story for anyone, even though you already know in your mind whats going on).

This seems to be the kind of story that you have to read the entire thing before you truly understand it. Personally movies like this (such as the Butterfly Effect) annoy me. I really didn't do it intentionally, but as long as readers don't lose interest in the early chapters then I'll be happy. :3

Eh... I don't Lee would love somebody after being roughed up and sexually forced... well not that fast anyway. ^_^; I can see Gaara confusing it as love since there's so many meanings to love and you mentioned he watched his brother (plus I don't think Kakurou's the gentle type).

Oh well... *waits for the next chapter*

*gawks* No I didn't see that one coming! *puzzled look* But-Gaara didn't answer Lee's question! Still, last I checked the rapist was targeting women, and blindfolding them. And if I recall my mystery novels right-a criminal NEVER changes his/her methods! So I find it hard to believe that Gaara is the rapist...Look-he went after Lee and let him see Gaara! And Lee is a guy! Gaara's NOT the only strong ninja! There are others! For all I know there could be a missing nin hiding out, in Leaf, but isn't it kinda risky to go around raping women, since the attacks seems to have drawn notice!

well i didn't see it coming but i certinly dont mind it

can i ask you to write a last chapter where the others find out whats going on?

i love stories like that^-^

did he rape those women???

great job!!!

Ooo you guys are giving me really good ideas.
dmismine: I can work that really nicely into my story! And it can help work around with the whole serial rapist thing, too.

I can't reveal anything big here xD But I'll just say that the outcome in this story will probably be a pleasing one and won't dissapoint most of you. (Hopefully) At the moment I'm writing chapter 3 but I'm at a loss for words so it might be a day or two before its up. But you never know~