rate_review Reviews

I think that it is a great start, and I did enjoy the story a lot. I think the one critique that I would have is that there wasn't enough time in my mind for Lee to grow to love Gaara...I think it was too fast and not angsty enough. As much as angst can be a hinderance, it can also be effective in a story like this.

I have to admit after getting critisisms early on I was a little put off and decided that I wouldn't write anymore. (I can take art critisism but with writing...well, for one thing I'm NOT a writer, and don't plan to be one. So it feels more like a personal attack on me. ^-^;)
But seeing that so many people like this and want me to continue- heck theres no way I can just leave this as a cliffhanger. <3 Well I've been pretty busy with school lately so it will be a while until I write the next chapter, but I promise to and once I do I'll let the people who left their e-mails know.

~Niko-chan (AKA Kennaki)
Thanks for reading! *snuggles you all*

You had better write aother chapter! Or... or.... or I'll send Gaara after you! O.o.... Nevermind, but pleaase write another chapter, I loved the story so far!

curious on how this will turn out Dominating!Gaara is.....sexy and a turn on O_O;;; but....I hate N/C! ARg...oh well...

still this will either be....Dominating!Gaara goodness and not really romance, (more or less lee getting banged a lot by formentioned,) or someone else was doing this...since well gaara usually doesn't do that...unless it's shukaku going nuts again goodness -_-;;;

Still keep on going because I really want to know what happens next! (arg naruto and them do not even know what is going on! But kakashi, Gai, and tsunade might know *nod nod*)

i am *underline that* reading!, please second chap ^^

omfg this could be the seed of an awsome plot. Please make a chap 2. PLEASE!!! I am reading this, isn't that enough? *flails*

Hey! Wonderful story! Full of delicious descriptions..

I recently fell in love with Rock Lee when I started watching Naruto, so today I searched for lemons of him.. this is the first one I read and I looove it~!! Amazing, original, neat concepts.. I would love it if you came out with more chapters and turned this into a romance, so please email me if you do so! (I don't have an AFFnet account..)

Much love.

omg!niko chan plz don't stop i lovrd your writing style!i hope lee falls in love with gaara because i think they make cute couple.plz keep it up

i like your story alot,i hope you'll make 2nd part of it. ^^ and excuse for my bad english ^^

Okay, I can live with your reasons. I know Gaara had a troubled past. But i really cannot see him being a serial rapist. I've read mystery stories before, usually criminals never change their methods. Gaara might have attacked Lee, but i highly doubt that Gaara is the serial rapist. Most likely Gaara heard of the rapist, and decided to copy his methods abeit differently...PLS have Lee show Gaara how to show love and his needs the right way!