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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol yeah, was kinda looking forward to a bit of Naruto x Sakura. But it was still a great fic!! Fun and actually pretty cute XD Nice job! Hehe love your fics =]
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOWWWW that was soooooooooooooooooo good! Keep up the amazing work! hehe i just love team 7 fics!
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awsome!
it's so happy and sexy
pure awsomeness
it's so happy and sexy
pure awsomeness
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Splendid! Fantastic! Excellent! So well-written, engaging, and just plain fun to read! :p
You have a very wonderful skill at bring both scenes, and characters to life, and I'm really happy that I found this story ^.^
You have a very wonderful skill at bring both scenes, and characters to life, and I'm really happy that I found this story ^.^
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Blushes meekly*...Well..umm...yea. THAT WAS THE MOST FUCKING AWSOME TEAM 7 FIC I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!!!!!! *Slaps hands over a mouth that won't stop running*. LOL..aww hell manners don't matter here. By really, on a more level note...this was great. You grabbed Sakura's emotions to this trio perfectly. At least she had some reservations. And, as far as the boyos go, no contest in your devine writting skills; you got them perfectly.
I am off to read your other stories now, thanks for posting!
Ja NA,
SeveredWings
SeveredWings22@yahoo.com
I am off to read your other stories now, thanks for posting!
Ja NA,
SeveredWings
SeveredWings22@yahoo.com
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a really inspiring one shot between sasuke, sakura and naruto. The sex scenes were hot, hot, hot but it also gave me the warm and fuzzies.
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
fkn hawt
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! There aren't enough good team seven fictions out there! Loved this madly! Keep up the amazing-ness! *grins*
Hellagoddess
Hellagoddess
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September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories. Plain and simple. I do wish you would have had the inspiration to write more on it, but I completely understand you not wanting to ruin a perfectly wonderful story. (And it was perfectly wonderful)
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September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I wrote a long review of this, and it vanished (darn it), so apologies if it does reappear, and this is redundant. Ok, so basically--It's GREAT!! I'm not usually into flashbacks, preferring my sex story to be "live"--but this works. Great combo of sex and love! Great backstory that makes this seem in character and pretty realistic. I'm a fan of the threesome universe too, so I'm happy to see another universe like that being born.
Hmm, I wrote a bunch of other stuff on the oral sex scene and threesomes in general, but I'm craving coffee--I'll come back later and write more. I love your Kakashi, Kibi, and Sakura story also, so I'm happy to hear that one is still "cooking." Awesome job! A+++
Oh, but seriously, Sasuke has never done it with Naruto Sexy no Jutsu?? Oh my, many interesting chapters ahead I hope!!! (and the DP--ok that's the thing that I really like to read and there isn't nearly enough of it to read--please write that scene sometime . . .
Gosh, and this is my short version of the review--you are inspirational!!! love it!!
Hmm, I wrote a bunch of other stuff on the oral sex scene and threesomes in general, but I'm craving coffee--I'll come back later and write more. I love your Kakashi, Kibi, and Sakura story also, so I'm happy to hear that one is still "cooking." Awesome job! A+++
Oh, but seriously, Sasuke has never done it with Naruto Sexy no Jutsu?? Oh my, many interesting chapters ahead I hope!!! (and the DP--ok that's the thing that I really like to read and there isn't nearly enough of it to read--please write that scene sometime . . .
Gosh, and this is my short version of the review--you are inspirational!!! love it!!