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by bean1498

person Bookworm51485
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I say good job. I hate stories where Sasuke is completely or even primarily uke, it's absurd in my opinion given his personality. And I abhor SasuSaku, not only because I barely tolerate Sakura most of the time (she's better now, but I have a hard time letting go of how she treated people before) and I seriously don't see Sasuke EVER going for her. But every once in awhile I'll find something where I don't mind it that much. I think yours is acceptable to me is because they all feel really OOC (though I guess that's a bad thing for some people) and so they don't really feel like the Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura that I know.
person wraithguardstar
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yup.

Good stuff, i happily await further installments
person aoshi4misao
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoo, that was really really hot. I'm so glad that I hadn't talked myself into doing something besides sitting at the computer today, because then I would have been delayed in reading this great fic. I think you did a good job capturing Sakura's reluctance and worry about a situation like that too, but really what other option does team 7 have? Anyway, amazingly hot, and well written. Great job, and keep up the good work.
person randomperson with no life...
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome...great..smutty!! that was the greatest threesome i have read for these three!! seriously!! the best ever!! i so can't wait for more!! hurry please!! this was just too good...gotta go...seeya...^_^