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for The Traveling Pussy

by Hestia

schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DAMN… WHERE CAN I GET ONE OF HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ibiki is so hot! Thank you, Thank you, Thank you... I think I may laminate this one and paper my bedroom walls with it! Very detailed, very hot story! Oh, and yes, I’m definitely ‘one sick puppy’. PLEASE KEEP GOING ON THIS STORY!
person Dicey
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn.. The ending was a bit too abrupt for my tastes. You could've written out in detail exactly what such a jutsu could be used for. I trust your writing abilities more than I do my own fantasies. Haha. Gods I loved the pairings! Even if it was majority het. GaaraNaruto kicked ass though. No mention of Sasuke whatsoever so I'll just assume he's dead somewhere. All the KakashiIruka stuff was hilarious. I really rather liked the gentle and kind Ibiki. And secret no name female protaganist kunoichi was pretty damn cool too as a character. Not as strong as DSNaruto (Please update soooooooon!) but just as hot and some nice fluffy bits as well. Bonus! Wonderful story!
person HumanInfiltrator
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are a godess!!

Loved how you never named her.
person murdoc
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So who was the girl talking? Maybe I missed it, I'll have to re read the last Chapter
person Allys
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, all the Ibiki's were a trip. Loved the nit of GaaNaru action, and a smexy Shino :D. I agree it was a great party, oh I also loved her dress, good call.
person Allys
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL That was fucking adorably Hilarious. Now you can jump up and yell a big YATTA!!! You finished! Take a moment for yourself while we all bow down :D. I'm so happy for you even though I'm sad that there will no new adventures of Ibiki and mystery girl but that's what re-reading is all about :). You are amazing, thanks for this story.
person Allys
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was really funny, I love that she was considering being a novelist you know i totally support, and the whole clothes thing , why did Lauren Granham pop up in my head?, lol. Hmmn interesting twist with Gaara, god I love Gaara in 3somes :), hehehe she's gonna be in trouble again if the sand man shows up. Why doesn't she ask Ibiki if he knows Kage Bunshin, then she could have her cake and eat it too XD.
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SOOOO man updates!

I cant believe it your really charged up!
YAY!
person Allys
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL that was fucking great, bouncing into Kakashi, Ibiki and the balcony, Damn, and the strips of leather O.O *drools* XP *cough* Ahem, sorry about that, I love the new direction this taking, talk about an awesome rebound.
person Allys
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:) Chibi's really? That was very humanizing, a nice little addition, cute and sweet.