rate_review Reviews

Are you actually gunna finish this?

Cause that would be AWESOME!!

Kudos to you for picking it up again i don't like to see you drop so many stories

Wow, that came out of nowhere XD, Arigatou Gozaimasu!!!

Highlights: That grunt was so Kakashi—could I just have had the famous copy nin cum in my throat? Then the thought that that cock liked to spend time up Iruka’s ass sort of killed my enjoyment. God, why did Ibiki have to be so kinky?

LOL XD.

Cool. It makes me really happy to know that the one talking isn't Sakura.

I actually think that it's either Tenten or Anko

ah man, it sucks that you are abandining this just when i found the story. you seem to have potential to go with plot and make it a full on romance , that whole thing with the 3 orphans had potential. my one questions that you haven't answered uet i dont think is what really happened in the intereagation room and why? i mean i didn't really get the blue room interegation either, how was she a security risk? i love your ideas you just need some good lead ins and little bits of touch up. i don't think that you need to have BDSM in every chapter so if you wanted to take a breather and write something on the relevance of the ninja school, or more on missing nins or something i would love to read it. and i think i have rambled on long enough with this topic, sorry you feel that you wrote yourself into a corner, i still like it!

I love love love love love this story. Please...write more. For the love of all that is holy. I fell in love with this story as soon as I read it.

I really enjoyed this, though it took me forever to figure out it was an original character you had. Honestly though, this story has turned Shino into an amazingly sexy image in my head... I think your Shino has done a number on me, and might possibly lead to some interesting pairings of my own in the future. :3

Wow, I'm so glad to see you've updated I really enjoy this story. God, wiow the sexual makes me wince('m not the s&m type) and at the same time it is very exciting. very well done. I liek the emotions you put into the characters. It's not all about dripping body parts but there is feeling and a strange psychological need within it.

Wow... That was kind of scary and sad and hot all at the same time. Thank you soooo much for the update, it's tripping me out that that hand thing was the same, yet Totally different from one story to the next. You really are super fucking talented. If you ever decide to break away from fan fiction and write an actual book I will totally support, buy it and recommend it to everyone I know (Well maybe not my mom, but everyone else :D !)

ahhhh soooo short!!
Was it supposed to be that short?

ANYWAYS!!! thank you thank you thank you for updating! i am so glad you finally did i saw you working on your other stuff and all i could do is hope.

So please let there be more! ending right there at the fisting was.....ah i like it

Hey, I love this story. Could you possibly finish it. I'm so anxious to know what happens. Thanks!